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03-18-04, 06:35 AM
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lol @ that one kid in here, that said he's the black Em hahahaa!!!
anyways, back to the thread.. this piece was aight, nice n simple.. |
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03-18-04, 09:28 AM
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lol that was me.
 I was jokin', though. Well, I edited 2 lines near the bottom. Do the lyrics flow betta now? As for the beginnin', I don't know what I could do to make it stronger. I'm done editing this freestyle. It's best that I move on to makin' new freestyles.  |
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03-18-04, 04:07 PM
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Yo, that was pretty tight son, you could up your vocab a little, but it was pretty tight none the less. Check my Made You Look freestyle and let me know what ya think aight.
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03-18-04, 06:25 PM
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thanks, man. I'm goin' to check urs right now.
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09-30-04, 08:15 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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Lol.................. Wow!!!!!
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»...  ..."тнє ℓєgα¢у"
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