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Ma uncle

Yeah i had to git this shit off of me
it may b open mic or it cud b poetry

don't kno how to act around him
but i'm not in love or nuttin

but i walk up to tha patio
and i c how this nigga's puffin

jus got outta jail...."DONT DRINK NO MO" kinda brotha
but his cuzin James gave hym some..that crazy ass muthafucka

he drinkin cuz hiz mom died..u kno it hit him kinda heavy
cuz he been in jail and i guess emotionally he ain't steady

but now its me who is on tha verge of fuckin jumpin
i mean if i had a gun tha barrell i wud b fuckin pumpin


but yeah i needed to fuckin git that off ma chest
sumtimez fuckin emotions take control of tha best
i kno its kinda short but u can feel in tha rest


comments pleez
yeah its tru
don't give a fuck if u think it sux..i want criticism that's constructive

I thought is was basic but you probably just keyed it.....

so I think its a good topic but I wanted to read more about that nigga
so you should of wrote more.......

one love......