: Take the reins of power and seize them , draw the battle lines/ The new holacust fights watch them freeze in painful dispite / Hear the sirens?/
Armageddon's just a matter of time
Tear down the voice of reason, let the arrows fly/
freedome is bullshit its a state of mind / Its not right that goverment lies, No one knows why, its just survive or die / If im in this fight then you bitches better find a place hide/ I been killed six times but im inhumane thats why im still alive/ dead, but now I wake /Rotten - eight years in the grave
smell the ripe decay No eyes in my skull, but I still see perfectly/Cut me I no blood to bleed
stab my skin, out runs the pus /try to kill what's already dead A corpse the living rotten
Resting dead - now I rise never forgoten
from the grave, horrors of the undead /sculls start popen from the ground/ breathing so deep you can see sound/ With thir own will they slaughter to please the demonds of hell /You tried to kill me /I don't die that easily as you can see now
back from the dead /awakend now I live again /


Comments ? Suggestions?

good flow
good topic
work on vocab
a lil though
7/10
keep droppin

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dayumm dat was sik yo
good flow and stucture