*Its kinda corny but a nigga just experimenting, give me some feedback good and bad*


I don't know what I want to be/
Me ten years from now I can't see/
I don't know my destiny,mom says god is testin' me/
My dad says do what suits ya'/
I tell him "I'm torn between my destiny & my future."/
I know the duffision of my confusion/
will lead to my evolution, my growth/
I'm takin' the oath, that states/
"whatever I do, I do with persistence/
I'll do it alone, no handouts, no assisstance."/
I'll do it with my own vigor, no stoppin'/
till a nigga gettin his 7 figures/
I'm gonna have hunger an determination/
For all these years of struggle and frustration/
All these I can clearly see/
But still can't see what I want to be/
I'm a young man without a plan/
When I find somthin' I'm a take a stand/
Won't stop till I reach the top/
If I plant my seeds now, I'll have a cash crop/

good flow and vocab

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Nice words that you are sharing

another good one dog keep it commin'..............


one love.............

yo dawg u killin me wit these sic flows, keep spittin it