ok heres the rundown
house rules
blind spit
in 15 min after check in

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yo check in so the time begins....................

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aight...aight...sorry, i was eatin' lunch....im here tho...ok....go ahead

aight blind spit at 3:50 aight time starts now....

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ok? u spit 1st or me?

dope reign is under the order of cease and desist//
you can spit back but dont try and resist//
this is a true MCs work of representation//
Lyrically beat you so bad they had to perfom amputation//
i stopped ur heart beat so now theres no blood circulatin//
my rhymes are piercin ur brain, aint that frustratin//
worrying about the reprucussions//
sit back and watch as the words give you heat ambrasions//
im not saying im how cause thats an understatement//
the verbals are so clear there transparent//
so u got a pottymouth from lickin toilet bowls//
i guess i do have the mind control//
im tryin to end the war-fare peacefully//
but it was too late you just another casuality//
you couldnt be saved even by private ryan//
this execution had the perfect timin//
your attemps for salvation were curageous//
but your combustion was spontaneous//

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im not saying im how cause thats an understatement//
in this sentence i meant for it too be like this
im not saying im hot cause thats an understatement//

hot not how

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you gonna spit you kinda over the time.................

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fuck it...guess i will

aight...

fuck around wit me and you get wasted//
get your face ripped so quick, it'd just be like you got a face lift//
I'ma start plain' orders,
have you court ordered so you can be my bitch and my waitress//
I'ma put this fake MC on the table//
yo, somebody help him cause he's unable//
neither your rhymes or you name make sense,
this is insane//
I've aint never battled a fake MC this gay//
now, i know what your gunna to say,
but it ain't gunna work--i'm straight//
you might as well log off,
cause even if you straight, i get this shit raw dawg//
fuck your bitch wit out her bra on//

aight....aight....let's get some votes on this....

lets get some votes on this shit we newbs need some votes

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Dope Emcee You Need To Work On Your "Creativity", "WordPlay", "Vocab", and Your Structure' .. I Wasnt Feelin Your Flow ....

LyriCal: Had A Better Flow, His Punches, Structure, Creativity, and WordPlay Was All Way Better Then Dope Emcees'

So ThereFore My Vote Is With You LyriCal!!!!!!!

One More Thang!!!!!!!!!!! Dope_Emcee' You Called Me Out' And Didnt Show Up For Our Battle' ... W'Sup With That Playa?

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alright so both of you need to work on your personals, lyrical had much better vocab and better punches, still lyrical work on your personals. dope your personals were kind of generic. battlin is different, you gotta your crowds attention. i give this one to lyrical. no hate.

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

damn this is a hard vote so lemme break it down
vocab- Havok
structure, havok


both were real good, but dope it was just to short, and u need to step up ur vocab, good punchlines tho

havok u got this shyt on lock no doubt

vote-havok