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Old 04-01-04, 06:24 AM   #1
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If i Die 2nite...dnt sleep on this

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If I Die Tonight:

I know i'm ready if tonight-is the-night that I say goodnight-to the-light/
Pain ignites-when I-write, my life called death to invite-to the-fight/
I wanna know Ive surpassed-first if these are sure to be my last-words/
Ive always had this vast-thirst for supremacy which makes the glass-burst/
Im not-afraid when I sit and pass away as Im getting caught-by-shade/
I'll stop-to-pray and thank my friends for everyday when pain stops-my-brain/
I hope you know-I wasnt-fake from my lyrics that show-I didnt-break/
I look below-my fuckin-fate and see enemies that hope-I dont-awake/
Taking factual-pauses at my funeral cuz you know it wasnt natural-causes/
Life-loss-is from crimes strife-bosses hung and crucified on actual-crosses/


Im here glowin-sweaty cuz I know-Im-ready if I were to Die-Tonight../
Flowin-steady with lyrics showing-deadly wont even Try-to-Fight/
Thankin family-n-friends for handin-me-pens when I Ignite-The-Fright/
Demandin-the-End for Expandin-my-Trends ready to Invite-the-Night/


Trust Me Ya'll will know I was ready If I Die-Tonight


I will absorb-the-cries because I already know that I was born-to-die/
Dont mourn-or-sigh because I'll be watching so dont ignore-the-sky/
Ive got my thoughts-prepared and I thank the Lord that Im-not that-scared/
Id rather get popped in a plot thats not-that-rare then get locked-in-chairs/
The only thing-I'll-miss isnt possessions but that beautiful being-I-kissed/
Sing-to-this at my funeral let em know im gone but still the king-exists/
The reason-I?m not-mad is because it was expected in the seasons-I have-had/
No 1 speak-when it is-sad fuck my enemies never thought of treason-as a-fad/
Death-from-clashes Burn me so Im ready for my future and spread-my-ashes/
Life: Ive said-Ive passed-it when i look in front of me and aheads-the-flashes/


Im here glowin-sweaty cuz I know-Im-ready if I were to Die-Tonight../
Flowin-steady with lyrics showing-deadly wont even Try-to-Fight/
Thankin family-n-friends for handin-me-pens when I Ignite-The-Fright/
Demandin-the-End for Expandin-my-Trends ready to Invite-the-Night/


Trust Me Ya'll will know I was ready If I Die-Tonight
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Old 04-01-04, 09:10 AM   #2
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nice flow, and vocab. I was feelin' that.
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Old 04-01-04, 02:30 PM   #3
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nice flow strutcher vocab..............


hot shit dog.........


one love....
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Old 04-01-04, 05:14 PM   #4
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uppin 4 sum feedback on this

peace
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Old 04-01-04, 07:56 PM   #5
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the best shit i have ever read right next to mine lol it was great
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Old 04-02-04, 02:26 AM   #6
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Real Good..Nice Flow, Nice Complexity, Keep Droppin
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Old 04-03-04, 08:19 PM   #7
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Real Good..Nice Complexity i was feelin it keep doin yo damn thing
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Old 04-03-04, 11:15 PM   #8
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uppin this in hurrr
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Old 04-04-04, 12:18 AM   #9
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Damn son...this like da best open mic i done seen on the boards so far playa. Nice vocab,multis good creativity....stay up playa
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