10-20 line
house rules ya kno da deal
no hate/crew/gay votes
due in 20min

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No ones gonna stop me

Watch me...
Lyrically illustrate my bullets goin' through ya chest//
No need for animation, cartoons, or fake affects//
Heartbeats and "SHOCKS", put you in cardiac arrest//
Go straight to ya chest, no need for ya bulletproof vest//
And by the way you spit i cant tell u have bad taste//
Sounds like you be usin dog sh!t daily for tooth paste//
Comercial ass nigga, this aint no asian avenue//
I dont even know why i took my time to battle you//
lift my 'hundred pound BARS?, i getcha stressin//
you weaker than your own lyrics tryin bench pressin//
Your steps to the top? im gonna have to stop ya//
you havin your own "style"? now nigga thats a "shocker"//
you dont wanna battle me, i lyrcially drop bombs//
you can ask your whole family, cuz i did it in vietnam//
and that weak ass verse: worse rhymes i ever heard in my life//
you lucky i didnt spit into them watts and murder ya mic//
Should i just spit freely? or show a "battle" demonstration//
This nigga is too stupid, where did he get his education?//
He dosent know that my murder intercourse is verbal//
gawd damn, you waker than MC's on Burger King comercials//
dont spit bullshit that no one wants to listen to//
its not that you suck, its just that ya too pitiful//

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u betta wish dat u neva fucked wit me/
everytime u rap u think that ur the key/
ur a guy, not a gurl/
when i hear u rap it makes me wanna hurl/
everyone knos that u prolly a known slut/
so what do u plan to be when u grow up/
u prolly listen to dat Backstreet Boy shit/
everytime i hear that music it makes me sick/
u cant always be the best/
when i get done wit u , i'll put u to rest/
while im suckin on your momas breast/
u thought u was kool til u met me/
i'll kick your ass so0o bad dat u wont be able to see/
u prolly so0o poor dat u live in a box/
you'll have fun suckin my cock/
"Holy shit, u fell on a rake"/
"Ohh my god ur bleeding,im gonna throw u in the lake"/
ur not a good MC/
u dont have anything to say against me/
fuck it im done, so0o suck my dick, i kno it'll be fun/

all righty can we get some votes^^^^^^

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No ones gonna stop me

well then tell peeps to get in here and vote

can we get some vote pleazzze

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No ones gonna stop me

yall vote on here pleazze ill return da favor come'on vote

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No ones gonna stop me

uppin fo some votes

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okay this is how i see it
FLOW-lil nae,you need alittle work cause right now you suck
inc. killer,you did iight could have done better but it waz good jus' not your best
MULTES-lil nae, you jus' pushed them too much (don't push the multes)
inc. killer, good job work on your voc. though you did good
RYHM-lil nae,this waz actally iight if it wazn't for you pushin the multes. it would of been good.
inc. killer,it waz iight i mean not your best but not ur worst
WHO WAS THE BEST- The Inc. Killer (good job man)

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so what chicks can rap too/
u won't battle me cause i can beat u/

can we get some votes on here

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hahahahahahahaa i kicked ur ass BIATCH

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there's a place called heaven
and a place called hell
there's a place called prison
and a place called jail

well im goin to all of them except for 1

ske u got one fukin vote so shut dat bullshit up

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uppin on some votes

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u betta wish dat u neva fucked wit me/
everytime u rap u think that ur the key/
this sucks
ur a guy, not a gurl/
when i hear u rap it makes me wanna hurl/
this sucks, no flow, and wtf kinda of punch is the first line?
everyone knos that u prolly a known slut/
so what do u plan to be when u grow up/
wow.. that second line.. sucked.
u prolly listen to dat Backstreet Boy shit/
everytime i hear that music it makes me sick/
ok.. generic diss and then a second line with no punch
u cant always be the best/
when i get done wit u , i'll put u to rest/
while im suckin on your momas breast/
generic diss.. meh
u thought u was kool til u met me/
i'll kick your ass so0o bad dat u wont be able to see/
so0o.. wtf. if you say it like that it fucks up the flow, which is terrible anyway, and the second line had nothing to do with the setup.
u prolly so0o poor dat u live in a box/
you'll have fun suckin my cock/
second line has nothing to do with the first, both are terrible punches
"Holy shit, u fell on a rake"/
"Ohh my god ur bleeding,im gonna throw u in the lake"/
this is terrible, wtf is with the quotation marks, they make no sense.
ur not a good MC/
u dont have anything to say against me/
fuck it im done, so0o suck my dick, i kno it'll be fun
weak as hell.

i don't know why you talk so much smack man, i give this verse a whopping 2 out of 100 just because its written in english.

Lyrically illustrate my bullets goin' through ya chest//
No need for animation, cartoons, or fake affects//
nice rhyme, pretty strong openener.

actually at this point, the battle is over. that one bar is better than the whole INC Killa verse.

vote, lil nae.

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