yo check it five bars
no d.r. hate votes
no feeding
you spit first verse due 15 minutes after check in
i'll drop right after u if its cool i'm just sicka no shows
aight how u du dat durr

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u wanna be loved i wanna be feard,nigga`s like u jump up switch and change gears u wanna be hard but i could pull yo card,ripe yo soul up tear ya chest apart,fuck um if they want it, i got it , auto matic srtaps have u nigga`s runnin up tha block,fuckin wit me im ah crazed nigga , im goin ill fade nigga`s ,we known set trippers hold straps wit chrome triggers,im ah made nigga tha don ah mob figure,run up u no longer breathin ,after this its hard 2 get even all over dreamin, i dare u to try get fucked and die u know tha rules an eye 4 an eye,nigga`s battle 4 home truf best believe im ah bomb first,lethal fire from gun burst, now yo ass stuck in ah fatal curse,tha pain is 2 much 2 bear inside it hurts,got conradds b hind me like adolff hit lerr when it comes 2 beef ,45`s put nigga`s 2 sleep shits get deep we fuckin wit me,swallow yo touge spit out yo teeth now thats beef

where you at homie my shit is already drop fool so whats up

yo hold up workin on homework i'll drop in a bit cool out

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New Shit Yo....Accomplishment....Clas Sic....Michigan.....Lets Go

can't "undastanen" my verse you misplacin, i gotcha like "bill murray" lost in "translation"...
yo state of grace i'm displacin, gotcha eyes in my hand yo face i'm rearaingen.../

i could walk wit a scowl, give ya a dictionary, and ya still askin to buy a vowel...
i'll rap, wait a while, and killya like mcdonalds bitch service witta smile.../

stop this, i'll kill ya, so ya set fire to ya rhyme book to say ya words is hotness...
i'll rockthis and knockya, my verses never seen before like da lockness.../

when dis herb reads my words his face lights up like kids at disney-land...
stapped down wit "bungee-cords" kid cant move any-hand, call T.I. tellem bout dis "rubber-band" man.../

I'll killya quikcly witout question, or suggestion...
possibly save ya life if clas sic you was reppin.../

forgit you suck, you winnen?, you nuts, cuz wit some reeboks on u get stomped like cigarette butts../
no choice if you getta vote bitch its luck, dont mess wit me i wont consider you fukcs.../

Finito MoFucka Votes

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okkkk breakdown

Opener - Accomp
Punches - Accomp
Flow - DON
Multi's - Accomp
Structure - Accomp
Sustainment - Accomp
Closer - Accomp
Enjoyment - Accomp

Accomp...you took this cat easily...nice verse...i felt your multis alot....ur punches were direct n hit hard...ya flow was tight but i actually felt don's a lil more....
DON...ok where do i start....well nice flow i lied it...u had multis but they didnt hit hard it was sorta like u jus put em there....ur structure is fucked up....u need to have direct punches that r aimed at him....dont jus tell bout wut ur gonna do...tell wut happens....use personals....fix how you write your verse....it makes u look worse than a newbie....
write lines like this...
write lines like this...
get my point....do sumtin like that cuz than people will actually wanna read yo shit...elevate n ull get betta......
return the favor
Me vs Re$tricted
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118045

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

looks i comes wit it gangsta and fitted,nigga`s trippin then im wit it,shoots 2 touch were nigga`s ah fill it,and if i see money im go get it,stack it ,flip it and make a profitt,clocks make haters run in shock,hollin screamin hit by shots. smarter than u so i broke up yo plot got hitters from la off my block,that ah draw,and when tha smoke clears its nothin u saw, u aint never saw ah nigga so live and raw, bet my shit connect take 2 to tha jaw,my click againts yo click line um up,best believe will make um run and duck,tellin nigga`s u can fade me but when i see u yo tail is tuck,my wins is skills yours is luck, when u see me nigga holla at me on harvard nutts

ACC verse was straight.. he had good punches.. wordplay.. vocab.. all dat shyt..

DON D' verse was tight.. i was feelin it.. i like dat gangsta shit..

but my vote goes to ACC because it was battle.. DON D's verse is something that should be in tha Open Mic..

i ain't trippin doe holla at ya nigga

accomplishment took this on every level lol i thank he too kthe battle cause he knew he would win had better pucnhz structure and everything this waz just a merkin
don diddy u need to steup up ya battle game

vote/accomplishment

yo still uppin tow more votes yo mane

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Upppin for votes man upppin yo

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drop votes i'll return da favor just post a link

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yo upppin for votes yo aight ya'll gonna get smacked down

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