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Old 04-07-04, 02:13 AM   #1
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Jus' 1 Verse But Wat Can I Say

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VERSE 1
why do i feel like i'm alone
i know that i'm not but this is gettin really hard
why do i feel like i'm alwayz a retard
like i can't do nothin right
i'm scard i can't see the light
it seems to get farther and farther away
like i could jus' sit down and decay
why is nothin goin my way
is it jus' not my day
i tried of it
i alwayz thought i had the wit
it say that i waz it
but not no more
i mean u got to agree
that sometimes you jus' don't feel like you
and no matter what you say or what you do
you sware that it'z really not you

NOTE;
NO THIS ISN'T REALLY HAPPEN IN MY LIFE.......BUT SOMETIMES I DO FEEL THAT WHAT I SAY OR DO DIDN'T COME OUT OF MY MOUTH!
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Old 04-07-04, 10:02 AM   #2
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the topic's alright been done abit but, the flow was solid basic but it worked your volcab could use some work though it's rather basic just keep working on it
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