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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Afterword 5 100.00%
Atticus 0 0%
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Old 04-07-04, 04:44 AM   #16
Atticus.
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nah archetype, i'd b the worst in the elevated lines
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Old 04-07-04, 06:16 AM   #17
Afterword
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yo i aint jus sayin this b/c he voted in my favor
but VC droped some ill comments
most lames on here cant recognize the complexities of a lyricist
with different literary elements inscribed within the rhymes
gud shyt folk

upppin
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-07-04, 06:36 AM   #18
Kingz
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have a bad habbit of flowing spuratic, and it may get hazordous/
but no need for that shit, i can get some old lines out of the attic,
to beat Atticus//

i think the opener killed it. after word im suprised u havent won b4. That was a good job and u improving. Mice flow and metas

atticus ya flow was iight. need more metas and punches

u both need to make it a lil more personal

good battle tho

vote afterword



hit this battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118374
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Old 04-07-04, 08:22 PM   #19
Afterword
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yo we got more comments than votes
i appreciate yur concern
but can we end this please
peace
uppin
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-07-04, 11:01 PM   #20
Afterword
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yo we got more comments than votes
i appreciate yur concern
but can we end this please
peace
uppin
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-07-04, 11:18 PM   #21
Triple_N
Ya mom massages my nuts
 
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this was a decent battle, atticus if you keep practing you could be a good emcee, its all good though cuz everybody has to start somewhere, so biggups son keep doin' u.
Yo afterword that was a tight verse son, I liked your word usage and how you described this forum you was on point. I also liked how u used your multies, fire son.
Flow: After
Structure: After
Word usage: After
Punches: even
Wordplay: After
Multies: After
Yo, y'all holla back peep it out son
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118131
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Old 04-07-04, 11:19 PM   #22
Triple_N
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oh shit my fault I forgot to post my vote
Vote: After
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Old 04-08-04, 08:31 PM   #23
Afterword
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seems like the guy above isnt the only one to forget to poll
lets get sum votes
uppin
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-09-04, 10:42 PM   #24
Afterword
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yo leave a poll vote
and ill be sure to check out ya battle
peace
uppin
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-12-04, 11:30 PM   #25
Afterword
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yo drop a few lines and a vote,
and ill be sure to hit ur battle up.
gud lookkin out

peace
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-19-04, 01:13 AM   #26
Afterword
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come on yall help us close this shyt and move on
i will check yall shyt fo sho
peace
uppin
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-19-04, 03:49 PM   #27
Afterword
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yo wauts krakin yall
please help a brah out
help us close this old battle so we can move on
and we will hit yurs
uppin
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-20-04, 03:02 AM   #28
Afterword
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From: LA
IP: CE13 565F

3-0
this is a k.o.
shouldnt it be closed
if not
help me close it(vote)
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271
 
Old 04-27-04, 10:19 PM   #29
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
~ Retired ~
 
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Afterword

Open 8/10
CLose 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Flow 7/10
Punches 8/10
40/50

Acctuis

Open 7/10
Close 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Flow 8/10
Punches 6/10
34/50
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Old 04-27-04, 10:45 PM   #30
MARVOLoUsJ1009
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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jea...dis battle was wun sided...att dunn u gota learn da battle rap not sayin it 2 be funny but u do

opener-after...att ya shit didn't ryhme and da structure was fukked up
structure-after..
punchlines-after..hands down other dude aint have nun
creativity-after of course
personals-umm i didn't really see nun from both of u
enjoyed-after...cuzz he came hard pause nahmean punches was landin could of came with some personals but he aint really need..

my vote-after
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120799

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120132
^^^^RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL
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