thanks for the feedback man... uppin for votes ^

by the way, cardiac arrest = heart attack.. everyone knows blacks get arrested real fast if they murder cops... didn't think it was too complex

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Why The Hell Did AccomplishMent and Kuniva Vote But Not Poll??

Neways Since Both In My Crew I'm Droppin Honest Vote..

Limited Edition: 6/10
Loved The Opener, Sick Flow Throughout Your Whole Drop and The Punches Was Syck. Nice Mulits and Metaphors. Structure Was Also Nice. Nice Drop, Stay Dope and Elevate.

Shadows Edge: 5/10
Your Flow Was A LiL Off, But Your Punches Were Still Hard Felt. I Think You Coulda Won Dis Battle If You Woulda Used More Word Usuage and Metaphors. Multis Wasn't Really NE, But Your Structure Was Nice. Stay Dope and Elevate.

Nice Drop To Both Of You.....Thats Why ILL-Mental Got Syck Mc's Like These Two..

Vote - LE

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Limited - good batle dawg, you did your thing and brought it hard wit good flow and some sweet punches and multi's.

Best Line - Fail to see the dangers, my razors slice you till ya rotten
Ya may as well give up like other herbs...you WILL be forgotten

Worst Line - NONE

Shadow - good battle also, didnt feel your flow as much but you had some good punches and multi's.

Best Line - LE couldn’t beat me with the luck of a four leaf clover
got rhymes ‘bout hot enough to freeze hell over //

Worst Line - you wanna get your ass molested like da Klan in compton
or get your cardiac arrested faster than a black (who) done a cop in//

OVERALL - I think I will have to give this battle to Limited because his just came together better and I thought it brought it harder. shadow your shit was tight to but just work on the flow and then you will be dope.

Vote - Limited

yo can you return the fav and hit up my battle wit ghost.. thx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118397

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aight.. thanks for the feedback al... uppin for votes ^

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OK BAR BY BAR BREAKDOWN!!!!

LE couldn’t beat me with the luck of a four leaf clover
got rhymes ‘bout hot enough to freeze hell over //
Ok opener..seen better...seen worse...5/10
you wanna get your ass molested like da Klan in compton
or get your cardiac arrested faster than a black (who) done a cop in//
Ok punch...looking for you multis...5/10
got no talent so you wishing it was me that fucked your mother
this shits meticulous, metaphors ridiculous that make your mind’s engine sputter //
Ok found a lil bit of multi action...but 'your mother' lines dont really gain wins...6/10
i made it my mission to lyrically limit your emission
truth is, fags like you only come in limited edition//
Okay...decent punch...ok personal....and a lil bit of multi's...8/10
LE production just suffered a one man reduction
This whole fucking site was witness to your destruction//
Ok punch...ok closer...decent overall....6/10

Verse Score
30/50

Well i've seen a lot better from you....fix that structure makes ya look like a newbie...work on multi's and personals...not that great of a verse...was expecting a lot more....keep elevating....

My light 'edge' flashin', destroying 'shadows' with vinyal
I AM limited...you plain wack...you can't get more original
Ok punch...flow was off...ok opener...5/10
You called my crew a 'clan', but this ain' Everquest, bro
Call yourself darkness, but the only black spot is my soul
Decent punch...ok personal....7/10
Afraid to have a profile, 'cause I might use it against him
I force feed losses, and you got anotha one in ya intestine
Nice punch and i guess you made it into a personal...nice bar...9/10
Fail to see the dangers, my razors slice you till ya rotten
Ya may as well give up like other herbs...you WILL be forgotten
Okay punch...6/10
Your life is like one that could of had the least bit of purpose
But you anotha clown...bow down...
...and welcome to my 'Merk'd List' circus...
Nice punch...good closer...8/10

Well you had the better verse....need to work on ya flow....werk on multis...good personals.....keep it up...i like ya shit.....

Vote - LE

return the favor.........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118869
P.S. shadow u forgot to poll ur vote in my battle

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aight, thanks for the feedbackk.. yeah my structure was weak. im workin on that shit.. check my new battle v acc.. uppin for some more feedback ^

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A'ight, dawgz thx for the feedback....

A'ight...Uppin' 2. Drop a link, and I will hit it up.

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shadow- nice intro, you stuck it, nice flow, good word play
ya controled this from the start

bad meti's
got no talent so you wishing it was me that fucked your mother
this shits meticulous, metaphors ridiculous that make your mind’s engine sputter //

good outro, 7/10

Limited edition- didnt feel it, you had some punches, but they fell of
good intro followed by a weak outro, that put me off, you could try keep
the good punches and cut out on the complicated ones, they stuned the whole thing

best line
"Fail to see the dangers, my razors slice you till ya rotten
Ya may as well give up like other herbs...you WILL be forgotten"
but it's lines like these that i didnt like at all
"You called my crew a 'clan', but this ain' Everquest, bro
Call yourself darkness, but the only black spot is my soul"
to me that shit's just wack-4/10

vote Shadows Edge

my bad, not allowed to vote,

by the way, where does it say u need a 100posts

so i dont waste my time again

well.. usually they say in the rules. doesn't list it anywhere that i know of. thanks for the feedback though, hit it back up when you get the 100 if i aint lost by then

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A'ight thx for ya opinion...

Uppin' 3, yo.......

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