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Shadows edge 1 16.67%
Sten. Cell 5 83.33%
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Old 04-11-04, 05:18 PM   #16
Sten. Cell
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Its Set To Atleast 10 Posts
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Old 04-11-04, 05:41 PM   #17
Oc6 The Caustic
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ok

Shadow- You started out ok, then got stronger as you went on. You had some good punches too, try to make them a little bit harder though.
"even if your rubber suit was on, my rhymes too hot to adjust to
n even if my rhymes was a dime a dozen you could afford just two"

That line was ill, good hit. I think you could of ended off better though, but good flow.

Stan. Cell- I was really feelin your intro:
Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle/
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow/

That is a great use of wordplay right there, it flowed together very good, way to go by setting it off. What I was really liking about your verse though was your Multi's, you had lots of them and they were looking good. You had good punches, I felt that they could of been better. I think you had some alright personaly's too. Here it is, because this was a good battle:


Flow - Stan. Cell
Punches - Shadow
Personals - Tie
Multies - Stan Cell
Vocab - Stan Cell
Originality - Shadow

So after my explanation:
Vote- Stan. Cell

GOOD BATTLE!
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Old 04-11-04, 05:49 PM   #18
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thanks man.. nice feedback... much respect, uppin ^^
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Old 04-11-04, 09:19 PM   #19
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anyone wanna battle me? i/m me on aim sn on here is tha same as on there
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Old 04-11-04, 09:27 PM   #20
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shadow- ya verse was good, nice meti's, nice flow
easy reader, i dig the intro, everything flows

"sten cell like bruce willis, cats about to die hard
each time i spit a bar, i leave you scarred, n ego charred"

from here to the end a nice drop, the end slight weaker then the intro
but still nice6/10

Sten. good punches, and alot of meti's like it all, but i believe that good
meti's should not only be powerfull but easy to read, i didnt like the flow
too much stop and go's, didnt feel it, 5/10

nice funny!!!!!
"Kid Dont Fight It,Your Suited For A Bruisin Like White Tie & Tails
Its Easy To Tell Your Tastin De-Feet Like Bitin Toe Nails"

weak line, Weak Intro
"Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow"
this killed ya whole thing for me!!!!!

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Old 04-12-04, 04:56 AM   #21
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whoa shit.. already this battle about to drop to second page. upping for votes before i hit the sack ^
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Old 04-12-04, 08:56 AM   #22
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Wow... sten cell knows how 2 recycle lol

a few really played punches... but was moe than enuf 2 win this E-Z
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Old 04-12-04, 09:31 PM   #23
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Henchman
sten cell knows how 2 recycle


Recycle?
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Old 04-12-04, 09:52 PM   #24
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sorry..but shadow won this one..like he said..work on your punches...
 
Old 04-12-04, 10:02 PM   #25
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really nice drop son... really nice.

Ya Flows Sloppy By Far,No Monopoly Cards So Prepare To Post Bails/
Get Use To These Bars Cuz Ya Locked In Cells' Like County Jails/
Hasty?I Post Lazily But Im Bringin In The 'W' A Lot Quicker/
Faze Me?This Kids' Crazy But I Crack More Nuts Then A Broken Snickers/

displays true emceeing skills by sten cell he used complex wordplay agaisnt shadowsedge.

bitch confess, you just can’t match the skills I possess
i seen you get merked by herbs, this shit is just excess
sten-cell an L onto your record, then trace 10 times
cuz i got you merked with each of my lines

this was a hot drop by shadowedges...
nice nice.. but it woudlve been better as your intro instead of your outro u need to coem teh hardest at your outro depending on your style to keep the reader fresh with the lyrics style...okay???

two good posts but i gotta give it to sten cell..
is wordplay took the battle seriously!
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Old 04-12-04, 10:07 PM   #26
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yea someone hit up these battles and ill returnt he faovr of veiweing and voting correctly.
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Old 04-12-04, 10:24 PM   #27
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Quote:
Originally Posted by NoLost4Rhymes
sorry..but shadow won this one..like he said..work on your punches...


This Shouldnt Even Count Since It Was Barely Explained But Its Cool
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Old 04-12-04, 10:43 PM   #28
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no, it shouldn't have. if you wanna dq it just pm strobe or something.
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Old 04-12-04, 10:59 PM   #29
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yo shadows edge better add that 5-0 loos by me to your lsit of losses dog jsut beat you beat you 5-0!
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Old 04-13-04, 12:59 AM   #30
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hey...shadow won this one..well he had more punch..and he had mulit's alright...so this is ta shadow..hey..

vote on these plz...

will return favors


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119121

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119080

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe
 
 


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