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5 | 83.33% |
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04-11-04, 08:32 PM
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violation-to-Va vs L.I. (Topical)
IP: D5EA 4189
OK OK OK QUIET DOWN CHILDREN....THESE ARE THE RULES OF THE GAME...
there will be no minimum or maximum amount of lines! there will be no hate voting! there will be no dickriding! the verses will be due by 12 midnight! i will spit first! and now for the topic.... Best Christmas!! check in and than i will spit.... hollaaaaaaaaaa
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04-11-04, 08:36 PM
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IP: D5EA 4189
checkit check check in.....now waiting for u to check in.....TIC TOC
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04-11-04, 08:42 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: AEBB 6D1D
igght im herr lets go lets see l.i da great come on hurr
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04-11-04, 09:12 PM
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My Verse
IP: D5EA 4189
Ok Ok...
Every Christmas has been great... But to pick one... Hmmmm... GOT IT.... My favorite christmas, by far, had to be the one this year... I can still taste our Christmas Eve dinner, roasted deer... Had the whole family over, for a Christmas party... Listening to The Beatles Christmas with Paul McCartney... Everyone was there, except for my pop... I wouldnt see him till the war in Iraq stopped... Me and him had many good times, and tonight i missed him the most... Every Christmas we'd serve the food, and our favorite was the pot roast... When it came time to do it this year, I felt all alone... My mom took me aside, i guess my amotions were shown... I started to cry, and she started to rub my back... My dads life is at risk, he wont even get a plaque... It was like he was over there for nothing, while Bush is sitting in relaxation... And my father's over there protecting Bush's ass and our whole nation's... I later went to bed and woke up early in the morning... So much snow on the ground, it was a state of emergency warning... WENT DOWNSTAIRS.... Presents under the christmas tree, hopefully i got what i asked for... Some clothes, a microphone, and a tv..best christmas for sure... Than I looked in the stocking, there was a lot of candy for me... But the best give was the microphone to help me be an emcee... I gave my mom her present, a jewelry box i made at school... It had had favorite colors and music played, it was pretty cool... The door opens, speechless i run into the arms of my dad... No more reminiscing on memorys cause there were more to be had... WAKES UP.... Phone ringing, i get outa my bed and answer it... It was the general of my dads unit, he had been hit.. My mom picks up and i go back and lay down... Finally hits me, my dad will never be around... So many emotions caught in me, i wanted to burst and scream... That shit had to be my best Christmas, even if it was only a dream... werd
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04-11-04, 10:08 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: AEBB 6D1D
my faviorite christmas hott\\
to many presents non-stop\\ madd drama dat u couldn't believe\\ but it was chrismas so i said gone brush off yah sleeve\\ my family wasn't even fuctioning right\\ two arguements an one fist fight\\ all i did was geek 4rm 6.am-till 12.am\\ then i went to get alil peace of da christmas ham\\ no worries on dis dey ahahha so i though\\ then pulled up outside was my brother knocc'' knocc''\\ i luv him to death but he a pain\\ to much of him would sure put a load on da brain\\ but to tha story at hand\\ i answered da door he come on lets go get in the van\\ so i put on my new outfit and dipped\\ i went up my moms house got out tha van an went in her wipp\\ as we drove to da burg to get sum shoes i chilled\\ watch cars on my way some gay dude was just staring in my grill\\ so i was like wow calm dat down then my moms hit a u turn to get sum gas\\ i got to pay 4 da gas i went an then looked out my moms axdentaly left my ass\\ then enough was enough i had about 10 dollars left so i called the pay phone\\ i forgot no was home \\ so i wait about half an i hour i saw my moms car\\ waved her down she there u are\\ then she said we looking 4 u every where \\ so i got in da car an went to da movies then the mall\\ afta dat i felt like i didn't get left all\\ soon i was ready to go home an change to play cloths\\ went down da street got a b-ball game started a showed off 4 some hoes\\ afta that i went home 4 dinna\\ ate some food turkey wit vingar\\ shyte then afta that chilled an play with xbox,and ps2 wit my cousins\\ beat'em so bad in da games it was by dozens\\ then as all dat was said done i went to da kitchen an ate a pic of cake\\ think my aunts had a competions who would best taste great\\ then it was 7.pm an it was dark outside\\ soon afta that a phone call came 4rm my cousin raggs\\ he was at war in the country\\ i was hungry he laughed on da phone damn dat boi got da munccies\\ so then me an my cousin went outside an played football\\ my team won an i said i beat all of ya'll\\ then i went in da house my cousin an family left\\ went in da house started beating grand thef\\ i dozzed off silent in my bed\\ my said raise up boi raise up yah head\\ got under tha covers i knew i was at home\\ that christmas was tha best because i wassn't allone\\    |
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04-11-04, 10:15 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: AEBB 6D1D
igght watchu think even though im a newbe i got game u nice wit da words an yo shyte was hott
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04-11-04, 10:16 PM
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IP: D5EA 4189
thanks...ya u need werk but u got mad potential dawg....first topical?...uppin 4 dem votes
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04-11-04, 11:10 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: AEBB 6D1D
good lookin out put"em up in da pole i need sum vots
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04-12-04, 12:27 AM
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IP: D5EA 4189
ok....uppin than going to bed.......................................
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04-12-04, 12:29 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 66F2 AB19
ok
good topic LI LI-u had some hot shit u stayed on da topic u did yo thing u had good structure i liked da story nice flow vocab couldve been a lil bit more creative.. but out the whole thing u get a 8/10 va-u alsohad a descent flow good struture good flow and u used better vocab then li both of yall really stayed on topic and urz was on target 8.1/10 barley got it kid still need 2 elavavte
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04-12-04, 12:45 PM
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IP: D5EA 4189
hahaaha ok uppin for dem thangs...................
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04-12-04, 12:46 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: AEBB 6D1D
ahah yah yo uppin 4 madd votes come on yo just 4 mo
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04-12-04, 01:00 PM
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IP: A7DB 8660
aight look.......
To me this wasnt even a close battle.... L.I.- i think eany good emcee would agree that L.I.s was way more experienced and deep.. when readingit you get the chills ... that means alot hes bringin shit tht people feel.... he had a hot ass setup and story line and structure and flow wordplay everything was definately there .... hot ass shit... V.T.V- aight you a newb and it shows... your shyt made me laugh alot .......you lackled madddddddd vocab dawg.. you need to elevate ya game on every aspect..adn stick to your own skill level....all i can say is keep elevatin and keep doin you! Vote L.I.
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04-12-04, 02:13 PM
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IP: D5EA 4189
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppp
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04-12-04, 05:59 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
wow decent topic so here goes the way i saw shit
vilotion to va not bad for your first topical drop you need to work on multis seriously elevate the vocab and work on the structure try to stay focused on what you are writing you seemed to get side tracked but keep dropping ish 4/10 L.I nice topic as i said before you stayed on point painted a good visual of what your flow was about ok vocab decent multis nice structure good battle fellas just keep elevating and dropping ish 7/10 |
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