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streetsweepa |
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1 | 16.67% |
NoLost4Rhymes |
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5 | 83.33% |
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i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for streetsweepa:
flow:your definatly improving this was a whole level better then that verse against me you had still room to improve though 5/10 volcab:alright basic use you should work on this cause it can be a deciding factor in close battles 5/10 punches: again better then stuff i've read of yours you are improving your best line,"ur chances of beating me are the same of breaking a curse//" still the strength of the lines could be upped but good job 6/10 overall:16/30 this was a leap forward for you as in the quality of your verse not sure if it's enough to win yet though breakdown for nolostrhymes: flow:alright alittle off in the first few bars but it levels out nicely 6/10 volcab:good use pretty basic could improve this 6/10 punches:not too many that really hurt best line,"cus when this battles over ull b further underground than ya crew//" aside from that pretty played 6/10 overall:18/30 good verse vote--nolost4rhymes gets my vote
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Light Weight
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IP: 3240 794D
damn dirtyboy is always doing big ass break downs
street - i understand you are new so i wont be that harsh ok you really need to stay on point and not get lost in the moment and stretch words just to make them rhyme your flow is pretty basic same with the vocab and structure nothing that stuck out to me keep elevating 2/10 nolost- ok your flow was decent you made some of those lines run a lil long and that fucked up your structure vocab was basic no real hard punmches some decent multis 4/10 vote-nolost |
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you gotta hear me again
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IP: 95C8 C1BA
both you suck but man i guess since i like punches i got to go with streetzsweepa. nolost4ryhmes it was ok keep going but work on punches.
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Flyweight
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IP: D0B1 D2B1
yo this was hot i give this to nolost 4 rhymes he came harder and he had rhyme structure ad an elevated vocabualry over strresweepa. there isnt much more to say the shit was one sided
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IP: 2208 FC10
I just need one more vote..and plz vote on my other battle win kitten
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IP: 2208 FC10
just one more vote
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IP: 2208 FC10
just one..only one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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New to RB
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IP: B5A7 1A55
Ez Dogg,
I came over 2 go check out your shit, an i gotta say it goes 2 NoLoss sweepa had the flow an sum OK structure, but waz just spitin a load o shit, Best Line = nah, I cant actually find 1 I like, soz man. Nolost came in with a bit better Flow, an hiz structure waz OK aswell, he threw in a few Punches. U got a decent bar goin here azwell dogg dawg i thought ud know that ya wack and that nolost cant lose// and i bet ya sex lifes dead cos like dynamite uve got a short fuse// Vote = Nolost4rhymes
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IP: 2208 FC10
thanx dawg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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New to RB
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IP: 2208 FC10
man..i would vote for u rhymes..but it says i need 30 votes
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IP: 2208 FC10
lolz..that's cool dawg...thats alright..someone will vote eventually
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The Classic
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IP: 8254 17B8
ya man rymes u had so some tight punches it was jus easier to understand, street sweepa just keep workin on it.. urs was ok also
so my vote goes rymes Vote in my battle
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IP: 2208 FC10
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hey u forgot to vote in my battle..i'll vote in ur battle now..just vote now also |
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
Aight Check Dis..
StreetSweepa: 4/10 You Need To Elevate. I've Said This In All Your Battles But It Seems Like You Never Take The Time To Learn. Your Punches Are Wack Because The Word Usuage Is Fucked. Mulits and Metaphors Would Help Your Verse Out A Lot. Nice Flow, Just Work On Dat Shit. Newayz, Elevate and Stay Dope. NoLost4Rhymes: 6/10 Nice Drop, Simple and Sweet. Punches Weren't Really Hard Felt But They Were Enough. Not Really Many Mulits and Meta's but It Atleast Had Sum. Flow Was Alright, But Structure Was Off. Newayz, Elevate and Stay Dope. Vote - NL4R ~R~ |
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