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supreme took this one had a good flow and some hard punchz and good structure wit a couple of good personalz
best linez
$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX*
I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*

clorox i didnt see much in this battle linez were real short and weak punchz when u had em get some worplay an stretch ya linez out a lil bit
best linez
..........money signs in your name?
thats a weird a occurence,
you could have had a heart,
but you couldnt afford insurence............

vote/supreme

vote on my shit

easily won by $$umpreme, ol dude, eww, sucky ass structure

$$ had great punches
$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX*
I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*
like that one
PORNSTAR? NAW, BUT YOU CAN SUCK ME RIGHT*
OBEY-YOUR-THIRST U CUM SUCKING BITCH AND I AINT TALKING BOUT SPRITE*
and that one

V/ Defently $$upreme

return honest favs, like here:

Nephew J vs Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117337

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Breakdown homies:

$$UPREME:
Nice opener. You had a very good structure which keep your rhyme nice and solid, nice clean flow. You had the better Punchlines also, plus your personly's were on the spot:
"$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX*
I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*"
Thats the punch and personly's I'm talking about, I felt that this was one of your best. You came at him at the end, defending youself also, nice flow.

Chalk:
Your structure was very weak and all of your rhymes were basic. Get at him with more Personly's and punches. You had some punches but I felt that $$UPREME had better ones. I was feelin' your vocab and flow, just work on your punches and personly's.

VOTE: $$UPREME.


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Don't Use All That Fancy Text Shit' Fucks Up Your Flow!!.. Like Red & Black.. .. Lol DAMN

And I Can't Vote Here.. No Crew Votes' ...

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chalk clorox you still want a rematch,............$$$