no more than 14 lines
no hate votes/crew votes/dr votes
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I 'raise water tempature' like 'heat-waves' i treat-gays like you so they might-run, so 'hot' i make the world see a 'white-sun'// 1

Impossible ways like a 'light ton', need 'medicine to stomache me' 'like tums', this kid gets 'beatings in more fights' than 'tyson'//2

You gank-rhymes, Blow ya mind like tank- rimes, a meak child with a weak style got him 'waitin for change' like bank- lines'//3

Murder ya flows cant shank-mine, we all 'think you stink' like 'rank-signs', i 'crank-binds'// 4

Like 'stitches' these 'hold-you-together', my flows gold and 'hot' even when its 'cold-in-the-weather'// 5

You as 'bold-as-a-feather', thats rite-ya-wack wouldnt be 'tite-or-black' 'rolled-into-pleather'//6

Like 'thunder-spams-as-i-play' ya 'wins filled' with 'o-digits' like 'no-midgets' noone 'under-stands' what-you-say// 7

Got 'chocolate-barz' cuz i make 'a hundred grand' with-a-stray, think-quick like a 'pink-slip' how there should be a 'ban-for-this-gay'// 8

Like 'dog abuse' you get 'slapped-bitch', like school children you 'act-sick' like 'prostitutes tryin to be pretty' i 'make-up-for-ya-wackness'//** 9

Your raps on 'text' the only way ya 'tracks-rip' this my 'shits-hot' so my 'craps-mokin' your attacks-jokin got 'bangin bars' like a 'black-smith'// 10

****makeup=pretty wackness=handjob

just felt like doing 10 lines..make sure u dont spit nething over 14 lines..gl dawg

Kid there’s no Doubt that ya got no skillz to Boast About
Like every time you try to shine, there’s an unexplained Black-Out 1
Im bout to give this pussy a complete Meltdown
Ya sound like a Clown, why don’t ya-press-klik, pull-us-a-trick, and make ya PC Shutdown 2
You wont get better at rap if ya Persisted
You might actually win, if ya skillz really Existed 3
Ya punches,…….. damn, I must have Missed ItI Insist That, you shape up, before ya get Blacklisted 4
Kid maybe ya should get some Referrals, Cuz no one in here wants to battle a Fag
I get more Personals, from the nice ass on my Almanac 5
I counter attack, tear ya neck back, make ya eat ya Dick, and then ya’ll only be Sick, stab ya with a mic stick, so you can hear ya neck KL!K 6
Kid you aint got a good Sense at picking easy victims, cuz I drop Bombz
Ya hungry for wins, but ya starving, like sharks ….with Nose Block 7
Ya think, your shit verses could Faze Me, kid ya Amaze Me
when ya get intimidated every time you see a dick on a Baby 9
I’m the illest, the fearless, up against the wannabe Nostradamus
this kid predicting this battle win, ……in his Polka dot Pajama’s 10
kid stop tryna bring the Drama, u cant even work ya Brain
ya career hasn’t even taken off, and already it’s down the Drain 11
You a Murderer, kid ya being very Melodramatic,
You couldn’t kill a fly, if he beat you with the Ugly Stick 12
Kl!k’s punches lack Power, he aint even good at singing in the Shower
Well here is my “Concentration Camp”, lets see if he dies within the Hour ……13

Weak but don’t need much to beat that
here’s 11 shots………enjoy

Cythis - Good Battle, some parts didnt ryme but overall good spit with some good flow and some hard punches.

Best Line - Kl!k’s punches lack Power, he aint even good at singing in the Shower
Well here is my “Concentration Camp”, lets see if he dies within the Hour (nice finish)

Worst Line - Kid maybe ya should get some Referrals, Cuz no one in here wants to battle a Fag
I get more Personals, from the nice ass on my Almanac (hmmm....)

kl!k - Alright battle had a good style and some sweet wordplay.. but you never used a single personal.

Best Line - Nothing really stood out to me.

Worst Line - Murder ya flows cant shank-mine, we all 'think you stink' like 'rank-signs', i 'crank-binds'// 4

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to Cythis for better punches and flow and wordplay, even tho Cy was weak at some spots, Cy came harder and took this win. K man you gotta add some personals to your shit and it will be hot.

VOTE - Cythis

plz return the FAV wit my battle wit NoNoNo ... thx
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119455

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Aight I can't vote cuz there's no crew vote, so I'll just give some feedback to Cyth:

Yo you had some nice punches in there, my favorite was the Nostradum one, because its really creative and is a nice original rhyme. You gotta work on your structure though, you have a lot of extra filler in there for the sake of multis I guess, but it fucks up your structure and takes the wind out of some of your punches. Mutlis really aren't that important in a battle unless its really tight, its flow and primarily punches/originality that make the battle.

try to keep all your lines between 10-15 syllables max, and generally 10-12 works for me. also, work on having more setup lines in there, it really adds to your punch.

Nice battle, keep elevating. Peace.

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^upping 4 votes

vote on this battle honst only and i will return da favor

can we get some votes on this
it would be appreciated

This was a good battle....neither verse followed any type of structure both verses just blindly rambled from begginning to end. But someone's goota win.
Kl!K...you had alot of wordplay an multies but you failed to put any personals or any strong punches in there, it was a good verse but a weak battle post. Next time focus more on making your punches harder, an put some personals in there
Cythis...your verse was kinda weak in spots, but the punches you had hit hard, an you got some wordplay in there, any thing I'd say is that you make your verse consistent, making it hit hard through out, nice battle, Stay up!
Vote: Cythis
Holla Back!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119204

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This was a good battle.neither verse followed any type of structure both verses just blindly rambled from begginning to end. But someone's goota win.
Kl!K...you had alot of wordplay an multies but you failed to put any personals or any strong punches in there, it was a good verse but a weak battle post. Next time focus more on making your punches harder, an put some personals in there
Cythis...your verse was kinda weak in spots, but the punches you had hit hard, an you got some wordplay in there, any thing I'd say is that you make your verse consistent, making it hit hard through out, nice battle, Stay up!
Vote: Cythis

basically hew said al lthat needed to bee said up your strucutres and that might help ya flow out kids

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you verse was weak. not alot of punches at all. you loss b/c you lacked punches, multiples and a good flow. i don'r even think you verse rhymed. you had a nice punch at the end bu youg otta be consistent.Cythis very nice verse. nice punches, multiples anf floe. you still could elavate alittle higher. i dropped and honest vote make sure you return the favor.

vote=Cythis

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