Here's the rules........

10-16 lines
no crew, hate, dr votes
blind spit
drop as soon as you're ready......(1 hour from check in)

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jea...

me feather weight? nah i got bullets dat a levitate dis chump's spine //
dogg u got 10 wins u still here y u dont spit in da elevated front lines?? //
i guess cuzz ya spittin-is-wack,u betta off pitchin-a-pack,or liftin-a-gat //
dogg u suck,"pullin ya girls weave" was closes u came da "rippin a track" //
marjay im da sickest-infact...but give it up 4 real ya rappin stinks-u-done //
i cant lose so u feel special i'll put ya "brain on da first" so u could "think u won" //[get it]
they watchin-dis-vet,u been on here a while & still aint got proper-respect //
nah u neva gon get signed dogg u only gota "shot" at da "net" //
stop frontin like u tuff and really-a-spaz...when ya verse go up everybody really-should-laugh //
look at dis clowns "location" u like "dutches" u make "philly" look badd //
stop talkin u cant rap u aint even half or quite-nice-fool //
and ya'll "cant even jump" so how da fukk can "...white guys rule..." //

*last line...look unda his name...and remeber dat movie white men cant jump you'll get it*

and yo dunn no feedin off my verse...

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

Thanks for checkin in asshole.............lol

Let's get the Facts Clear, I'm straight spittin, he's kickin Raps Queer//
Found out he is Da Sickest On Dis Site....... from the results of his Pap Smear//
I'm Startin To Spray, killin this cat in a Harmonous Way//
Even if I was drug free I'd still smoke this MarvolousJ//
I'm Poundin This Soldier, he can't win, I'd even Clown Him In Poker//
Showed up wit Queens? Check the sig, I'm Down Wit The Joker//
All he see's is Black And White, racist bastard can't Back The Hype//
I spit so sock that even Malcolm X would say "This Cracka's Tight"//
He spits Fake Threats, I'm suffocatin this dickhead like Latex//
I'll lyrically wet this cat bringin new meaning to the way I Spray Text//(Techs)
He's Stutterin, you should know how to spit it out, your Mother Did//
Check his sig, he is nice............. he just gave me Another Win//

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I had my shit keyed up for about 5-10 mins now just waitin for you to check in and you think I'm gonna feed? I never feed!

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umm doggy whuts all da fukkin talkin 4 u spit i spit rite fukk dat check in shit i just click on reply and type my shit

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

I just wanted you to check in so I knew you were gonna show...........If you don't check in and I drop my verse, you don't have to show and it would be a big waste of time for me..................

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true well im not wun of dez lame dudes on dis site dunn..if i say post da shit up and i'll spit ima spit

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

Why the fuck did you change your sig as soon as I dissed the shit out of it. His sig said somethin about "no one bein as nice as him" or some shit like that. What a fuckin bitch...............lol. Maybe I should change my name or the title under it so no one gets your punches either..........lol

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Alright.. alright.. quit the talking. Ok, real tight battle, but I was feeling enygma's verse more. Only thing that sucked about your verse was your closer:

"He's Stutterin, you should know how to spit it out, your Mother Did//
Check his sig, he is nice............. he just gave me Another Win//"

That flow is absolutely horrible, Did and Win don't rhyme, and there's barely a punch there. No set up line, the stutterin has nothing to do with what his mother did.. all around the worst closer I've seen from you. The rest you came pretty tight, the Malcom X line was kinda tight.

Marv.. you had it going at the beggining but just lost it here:

"dogg u got 10 wins u still here y u dont spit in da elevated front lines?? //"

that's a great set up line, you should have used it to go into a punch about he only battle herbs or something.. but instead you just left it alone, and your verse went downhill from there. you also had problems with structure/flow, some of your lines were way too long.

v/enygma.

hit back my battles in my sig..

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

The punch was in the first line. Stutterin, couldn't spit out words, his mother couldn't spit out my pimp juice........lol. Wasn't too hard to understand, maybe I worded it wrong........... uppin for more votes

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diz waz a g'hood battle nah mean. marv ya shit was nice dog,punches ta multis u was killen em...also u had good flow and structure...enygma ya shyt waz nice to...ya didnt have punches so that kinda made u fall off...ya multis was g'hood...flow was on point...and ya structure is nice....imma give this win ta marv kuz he had sum nice multis and punches up in derr...and battles ta my knowledge should always have punches..ya know shyt ta make ya say "Damn" even tho i didnt say "Damn" i feel marv still got it cuz he attempted to reach the "Damn" point....good shyt tho playaz..and drop by my battle link in my sig and give an honest vote. 1

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^^^goodlookin i'll return da favor.....upppin 4 ore votes.......and enygma suck a dick and get a glok fagget u played out da personals about and y u not in da elevated frontlines u got like 10 wins

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

^^^ Elevated fronlines are inactive as fuck. Battles stay open for months in there....... and how the fuck can you say personals are played? If it ain't personal then it's just generic..........If you weren't worried about personals, you wouldn't have changed your sig.........

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cuzz u was like a fukkin 1381738917389174 nigga da say dat about me on dis site....and i had da let niggaz know dat dem shits is played da fukk out and ya shit was wack...and battles o dis shit stay open 4 month's 2 datz no excuse dunny...nahmean and i voted on wun of ya battles on u aint even return da favor datz a bitch move

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT