aiight I aint gonna fuckin give yall points..but I will explain

Supreme
Punches-ok ya punches could've been a lot better...to tell u the truth, they were whack.need an example?"Don't Fuck Wit Me, I Bust Venmous Nuts Like Anacondas*
Trust Me, Your Easy To Break Like Cheap Condoms"
Ya opener was ok...but ya closer was straight
Ya personals were also on the weak side...killa Bwoy, The Only Person You Hurting Is Yo Self*
Battling $$upreme Will Make You Sick To Your Stomach And Have You Loosing Up Your Belt*"
If u say u Rookie of The Year....u have to live up to ya name dog




Killah_Bwoy
man ya shit was kinda sucky at times too
Punches-

Ya Rhymes' are shit movin' up in the game You runnin' back like Emmit Smith.../
You get bombed' back quick Leave A hole in your stomach like compact discs...
that was ya best punch...and to me, ya only punch.
I didnt see an real hot personals..
but ya flow was a little bit better....but both of yall could have done way better
even if it was a keystyle...and I've fuckin battled you before Killah so I know what u capable of....Holla and I know both of yall are lookin at this so fuckin scroll down to my sig and vote on my shit.Uno...

killah
flows:6
wordusage:7
Punches:6
Creativitie:6
overall:25

$$upeme:
flows:5
wordusage:4
Punches:6
Creativitie:7
overall:23

vote:killah
both work on personals multis and vocab

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If His Were Weak..
Then Y Did U Vote 4 Him????
I'm Lost......

oh i think cuz he sed my flow was a lil bit better...damn this is close 3-3

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KiLlAh BwOy

are u asking me Supreme?

wow, this is a good battle all around.

punches: some of supreme's punches were wack, like:
War? You Don't Want None, My Crew Got Infrared Beams, We Leave Face Looking Like Chicken Pox
however, that shit about doug christie and rice crispies was ill.
killah had slightly better punches overall, like
Ya Rhymes' are shit movin' up in the game You runnin' back like Emmit Smith.../
You get bombed' back quick Leave A hole in your stomach like compact discs...

flow: you gotta work on your flow, supreme. especially those last two lines, the second one
was WAY shorter than the first. killah -- pretty good flow

vocab: wasn't great from either of you, but i think supreme used some better words

multis: killah bwoy takes this, specially with
Flow so intell-igent You couldnt get A 6 figure job if you was bill on "the apprentice"../
Spit godly flow but rap for the "hell"-of-it You can't get passed me like wired fences../

creativity: good all around, interesting metaphors, can't say anyone clearly won this

overall though, i vote killah, cuz his punches hit a little harder and his flow was better


vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...78&page=1&pp=15

okay good battle...here my breakdown...

first up is supreme

killa Bwoy, The Only Person You Hurting Is Yo Self*
Battling $$upreme Will Make You Sick To Your Stomach And Have You Loosing Up Your Belt*
7 decent...fine opener...not really a punch but it was okay
I'm Bout To Demolish You, So I'm Saying Sorry In Advance*
Killah Bwoy Better Run, Cuz When I Drop, I Come Like An Avalanche*
7 kinda played...but still nice word play
You Dont Stand A Chance, I Pop More Kernels Then Rice-crispies*
Killah Brings Defensless Flows I Got More D- Then Doug Christie*
10 sick...the best line of the battle...sick ass line...smart shit supreme
Don't Fuck Wit Me, I Bust Venmous Nuts Like Anacondas*
Trust Me, Your Easy To Break Like Cheap Condoms*
8 pretty good...but anacondas aren't venomous just letting ya know...
War? You Don't Want None, My Crew Got Infrared Beams, We Leave Face Looking Like Chicken Pox*
Battle $$upreme And I Leave Ya Wet Like Kitchen-mops*
7 pretty good...overall a solid battle verse...not great but good


and now for killah bwoy's verse

first off i gotta say ididn't like your structure, but you had some nice shit going on besides that

Ya Rhymes' are shit movin' up in the game You runnin' back like Emmit Smith.../
You get bombed' back quick Leave A hole in your stomach like compact discs...6 terrible...i think i've heard that exact second line...and the first line is stupid
The True Fact Is I'll leave you covered in "shit" like a faggets mat-ress....../
Leave You flamess like broken mat-ches Rhymes dont fraise me dawg you need more prac-tice..../8 brutal first line...but nice second line...and nice multi...good shit
Flow so intell-igent You couldnt get A 6 figure job if you was bill on "the apprentice"../
Spit godly flow but rap for the "hell"-of-it You can't get passed me like wired fences../6 what the fuck does that mean...your first line is retarded...it doesn't make sense...at all!!!..wtf...but at least you came back a decent line...if he was bill he'd already have the job...and plus he would be smart already...so what the fuck are you talking about?
Rhymes'll knock you so high You could stick your tongue out at left-eye..../
I Spit drive-by's Ya rhymes is unsteady as if I put a bullet in your left-thigh..../
No need for you to check-in like a horny boy "you'll get beat in a second...../
Lines'll leave you with a "red neck" Log off quick 'cause a win is what i reckon'.../
7 decent...only cause of the multi's no punch...overall verse had one really strong rhyme



my vote goes to supreme because his verse actually made sense...ya dig...

v-supreme

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KiLlAh BwOy

killa Bwoy, The Only Person You Hurting Is Yo Self*
Battling $$upreme Will Make You Sick To Your Stomach And Have You Loosing Up Your Belt*
~~~ite, not worthy opener, was a belt got to do wit anything
I'm Bout To Demolish You, So I'm Saying Sorry In Advance*
Killah Bwoy Better Run, Cuz When I Drop, I Come Like An Avalanche*
~~~heard that before
You Dont Stand A Chance, I Pop More Kernels Then Rice-crispies*
Killah Brings Defensless Flows I Got More D- Then Doug Christie*
~~nice punch, but like this and the next i dont like how u gotta be talkin yourself up to do dem puches, should make em' both punches someway. but they still good punches
Don't Fuck Wit Me, I Bust Venmous Nuts Like Anacondas*
Trust Me, Your Easy To Break Like Cheap Condoms*
~~~nice
War? You Don't Want None, My Crew Got Infrared Beams, We Leave Face Looking Like Chicken Pox*
Battle $$upreme And I Leave Ya Wet Like Kitchen-mops*
~~decent punch i guess jus a bad topic to be makin fun of sumone, less props for that, if u ganna be talkin bout sumin like chicken pox or mops, make 'em funny or real witty cuz dey aint cool and need sumin to make 'em cool
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Ya Rhymes' are shit movin' up in the game You runnin' back like Emmit Smith.../
You get bombed' back quick Leave A hole in your stomach like compact discs...
~~first punch good but second aint makin sence ta me. good double punch attempt though
The True Fact Is I'll leave you covered in "shit" like a faggets mat-ress....../
Leave You flamess like broken mat-ches Rhymes dont fraise me dawg you need more prac-tice..../
~~~not to cool exept that matches part, cuz that shit fagget thing jus nasty
Flow so intell-igent You couldnt get A 6 figure job if you was bill on "the apprentice"../
Spit godly flow but rap for the "hell"-of-it You can't get passed me like wired fences../
~~decent punch
Rhymes'll knock you so high You could stick your tongue out at left-eye..../
I Spit drive-by's Ya rhymes is unsteady as if I put a bullet in your left-thigh..../
~~~if u said unbalanced or sumin like limpin, that wouldda made more sense
No need for you to check-in like a horny boy "you'll get beat in a second...../
Lines'll leave you with a "red neck" Log off quick 'cause a win is what i reckon'.../
~~~nice closer made me laugh props

vote- killah
more punches didn't talk himself up as much and was better to read.

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