I got tha Ill Critique, steppin to tha mic Wit a Real Physique/
Im known to kill for cheap, and also steal ya sleep/
I crash some bars, like Mike Tyson when he drunk and fightin stars/
I write wit zsarz, the only time you doin BIG things is when you TYPE IN LARGE/
I fight the Sarge, Generalz, Captainz, they all the same to me/
I reign to be, that same emcee, that killz ya beat like heart attackz in War Veteranz/
Ill kill ya wit my repatoiur of Stored Weaponz, My knifez strong cuz my sword flexin/
I stay sick like hoodz wit no immunity, Rap battlez is sick when im in da Community/
All yall do iz "Jack"son thiz time Mikez outta da picture/
Like old people readin da skripture, you stuck behind like a permenant fixture/Fixadent=for denturez
So anyone this iz just a taste you not gettin a real dose yet/
Imma Bad Boy like Fred and Chopper Fightin Puffy and Tony Dofat/lol

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Nice keystyle............... I know you're tryin to start your own crew but if you want to join an established crew, come check out Crhyme Sindicate or just drop me a PM........ Either way, good luck in what ever you decide. Your verse had a few choppy spots where shit didn't really rhyme but I can tell it was just a keystyle so, no worries.......... Keep 'Em Comin

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