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uppin for votes......

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yo raps aint shit that shit
was raw and boring in ways
i cant explain
ya'll both need practice
and help
i aint go to vote for ya''ll
sorry

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all these nigga haten on yo both of yall spit was alright , but nither one of yall gone win battles spittin like that yo u fallen off , stop doing what u doin , bo u tight but i think that was not your bestbut it was tight , but yo had better punches it just was not all together write some shit and look over it , bo u tight and i would like to battle u

vote goes to yo
holla

good looking still uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

SHIT HERES DA DEAL
YOUNGYO=
PUNCHLINES my rymes is reckless they leave u like a chain (neckless)
i dont care if u big or tall but the only reason you here because
ya mama took my nutt off the wall//
and hes mama got them lock jaws // he 18 teen and still piss
on his balls//
shit he weak he should have just choked / ask his mama how she
got pregant from me nuttin in here thorat// DAT MADE ME LAUGH//

FLOWZ=HOT

BUT LOOK BOJANGLER WHAT DA FUCK! WHAT KIND OF NAME IS DAT// WHATEVA U HAD GOOD PUNCHES BUT U AINT HIT HARDER//

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

Lol well obviously yall know who g0t this...but imma explain
Punches:yo
Multis:N/a
Vocab:bo
Creativity:yo
structure:both
Flow:yo

my vote is for yo

i was feelin bojangle he had waaay better shit den da otha guy ...

youngyo u gotta elevate a lot and u had to many played out lines ..and ya verse didnt make sence i was confused through da whole thing

ma vote: bojangle

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chea both emcees was iight...but both yall had sum bad structure,so it was kinda hard to read em...but imma have ta vote for Bojangler on this one cuz he had better vocab and his was a little easier to read the Youngyo's.
Punches:Youngyo...the chain[necklace] line was good
Vocab: Bojang...he had better vocab
Opener:Youngyo
Closer:None
Structure: Bojangler..even tho it was hard ta read,but not harder then Yo's so u get this
v/Bojangler

nice battle playas

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120128
^vote honestly on this one

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all these nigga haten on yo both of yall spit was alright , but nither one of yall gone win battles spittin like that yo u fallen off , stop doing what u doin , bo u tight but i think that was not your bestbut it was tight , but yo had better punches it just was not all together write some shit and look over it , bo u tight and i would like to battle u