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4 | 44.44% |
insidious |
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5 | 55.56% |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Dick rider, I removed this biter from my nuts like I had crabs
Your reputation and notebook are all the same full of bad raps hmm.. ok.. the first line had nothing to do with the second.. not great I realized ur mom didn't want you, watch QP put this in action hated me so much she spent hours in labor trying to put you back in hated you? or hated him? either way, kinda played but not bad I'll Castrate u With A Butter Knife and Do It With Success, Look At My Verse and Start To Assess You Say You're Big, Who u Trying to Impress?, u remind me of Rosie O'Donnald Another Dyke In The Press meh... not great, kinda stretched and forced multi it seems like I Start With No Hesitation, merkin You Is My Obligation I'll Do It For Free, with no Motivation-or-Compensation Now Watch this Transformation From Man To Beast with a 1-2 Combination. I’ll Put you To Rest In Your Final-Destination hmm... again seems like a forced multi Bobbing For Apples, i'll Smack you Before You Bite Your A Virgin Rapper, Teasing Me so u Think You Tight (haha) pretty ok, pretty ok This kid is serious about posting hot rhymes but I don’t know why he even pretends Cause like the last 4 lines of his every verse this faggot only cums hard in the-ends hmm.. kinda ok, its personal.. but not great Take ur flow and demolish it, face in the carpet like your about to munch Come On Hit me in the mouth bitch, I’m quick to spit out a punch decent closer.. not great NOT! i could give a fuck about u or whether or not u accept this loss, ok ok...i'm sorry i said that, come back, u know i just like to be the boss wtf.. by the end of this rhyme i'll have u spinnin in ya chair, screamin to ya mommy "NO NO NO! INSIDIOUS DOESN'T PLAY FAIR!", hmm...interesting style but no real punch... my line's hit u like they were concrete, everythings solid in my spit, after u read this and 'digest it' it'll leave u shittin bricks not bad, not bad ur ass can't spit a good rhyme if u tried night after night and got to BITE! see, u'd need a collaboration just to make that peice at least HALF nice, the rhyme is weak, the first line ruined what could have been a good punch quick'll prolly whine and complain how after this he should get respect, when u were born...how MUCH female DNA DID they inject? theres no such thing as female DNA.. do you mean x chromosome?.. that would just make him retarded, but i dont think thats where you're going with this pm-ing me like, "since u can't close it i guess we'll go", ya see, u tried to avoid it but i still get to tear up that hole, decent i prolly used the hump thing too much in this rhyme...it's for humiliation, but that's the easiest way for me to describe our situation. its just annoying is what it is this fool thought he could beat me...after this he'll block me see- this fool couldn't 'put me on ice' if he coached a hockey team. nice punch, but not the best closer ok, overall, this was kinda disapointed, I saw a lot of filler on both sides, not much creativity or wordplay that amounted to hard hitting punches. I give it to insidious because he had slightly better flow and a little more wordplay, but it was tight. quick, I've seen you spit much better. peace.
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