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Old 04-27-04, 07:26 PM   #16
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yo thanks for the feedback but i want some more, hit me up...
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why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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Old 04-28-04, 11:59 AM   #17
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yo i want more feedback holla back
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame//
into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9''

why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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Old 04-28-04, 12:02 PM   #18
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hmm...sumtin i liked about this even though it was kinda short-ish and had no real topic


good flow...rhymin was coo


7/10


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Old 04-28-04, 12:27 PM   #19
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nice drop man, your emotion was kinda deep and your flow was iaght, next time tho up your vocab a bit and try to be more creative with your future drops. structure was pretty good aswell, the lines were a good length which helped the flow, nice drop
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Old 04-28-04, 12:44 PM   #20
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yo i need more feedback yall holla at ya boi
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Old 04-28-04, 03:59 PM   #21
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yo i need more feedback...........
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