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Old 04-29-04, 02:46 PM   #1
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Young Breezy,Krysis, and dem.....haha(feedback)

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Niggas BALANCE ya flo like JUGGLERS durin HIGH WIRE ACTS//
Or do like OFICE GEEKS and face the FAX(Facts)//
AYE God//
How u gonna compare ya Lil doozi Battle record when i got V's that match the numbers wit A-ROD//
Just The Science//
Adjust the Guidance//
Or get ZAPPED(BIZZZZZZZ)...Like Feinds Bathin wit a Stolen APPLIANCE//
It's best if u stop//
Cause yall good be On a BROADPLAY Stage as the Director and not Get PROPS//
I know u wish u was a Reincarnated PAC//
askin GOD for ONE MORE CHANCE//
While i smoke the BIG L and get yall Crushed like a BIG PUN SANDWHICH after a Sexual Romance//
Look into the eyes of the Phatom//
and Phalam//
How STUPID yall are like the Guy that sold the Panes to BIN LADEN//
Net Cee's//
dreams Of MTV or BET..TRL//
See Pa..Welll//
Your Not CUT for rap like BROWNIES on a COOKIE SHEET//
and yall is PUSSY like NOOKIE MEAT//
The Rap Blade gives yall three Slices like the Side of the Head on the Old VANILLA ICE//
and Like MENTALLY CHALLENGED KIDS..yall can't understand LIFE//
I guess yall 2 LEGIT like Hammer//
O..yall wanna be PAC well heres a Start on ya way u can be my BACK UP DANCERS!
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Old 04-29-04, 04:38 PM   #2
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yo this shit wasnt that good. 5/10. i didnt like the flow nor the structure. some shit didnt rhyme well. the similes werent to good either. up the vocab. no hard feelings homie.


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Old 04-29-04, 11:12 PM   #3
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yo what kind of lyrical content was that. R U suposed to diss me cause if u r nigga please, thats the weakest shit i have ever heard, ive heard better from a 10 year old. if u wanna come @ me u gotta come harder n dont fuck wit my shit u poor excuse for a mc
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Old 04-30-04, 12:03 AM   #4
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how u gone come on here n spit some shit thats lame
but its my turn n imma leave u walkin wit a cane
nigga u wack the only way u could blow up is strapped to a grenade
u spit n gave me a scratch no need for a bandaid
but trust me my spit'll make u need stitches cause u gone feel the blade
open mic cats listen up optiksz aint a real mc - no sir
how the fuck u gone try to be hardcore lookin for a backup dancer
if we meet up face to face imma end up in jail for man slaughter
id be givin u to much to call u a mentally challenged kid cause u just dumb as fuck
anybody ages 5 n up can chump u out cause they know u won't buck
i dont need to be a reincarnated tupac cause my rhymes r already tough
boy u wouldnt last longer than j lo n puff
that nigga talkin bout blades n stuff
but i bet he never held a hand gun he was raised to bluff
listen to the things he says n trust
u will realize this nigga aint gangsta he just playin it tough
arsen is on my record now im bout to blaze his stuff
look at 1 of his post he think he a pimp but he aint never get a cut
he 19 n spittin rhymes out his butt
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Old 04-30-04, 08:28 AM   #5
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give a lil feedback
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Old 04-30-04, 09:02 AM   #6
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Both verses sucked............but especially the first one.
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Old 04-30-04, 09:29 AM   #7
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it wasnt my best i was tired he aint any comp anyways y waste talent
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