uppin for some votes...................................

uppin

come on we need some votes in this battle

yall can drop a link- im sure blaze and me will drop a vote on that

my vote goes to de leon just for gramatical structurecan i get some votes on this battle plz

http:community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php.?p=1248687

yo One you didnt drop your vote dogg??????????????????????????????????

lets get some votes

uppin this shit^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

i hope yo rymes are updated/and verbally stated/cause yo shit looks like somthing you just ejaculated.

^^^^^^^^ lol...dat was hot


Im Blaze a.k.a. emcee with a sweet flow/
i see what u thinkin when i leave yo brains with a peephole/


^^^^^^^ lol...dat was hot


you soft like butt cheeks, im grimy like mud fights/
you aint a rapper, the only bars you know serve bud lights/

^^^...like ur style...funny...but the bar fight thing was played


leave yo ass in the middle of the desert strangled and raped to death/with duct over your ankles and a paper bag to take a breath.

^^^^ kinda weak closer


FLow Jus
Rhyme Del
Punches Jus

Vote: Jus...i loved ya style man


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heres my breakdown

deleon:

flow:7/10
structure:5/10
punches:8/10
wordplay:7/10
multies:6/10
vocab:6/10
opener:9/10
closer:6/10

overall: 54/80

juss_blaze

flow:6/10
structure:7/10
punches:7/10
wordplay:6/10
multies:6/10
vocab:7/10
opener:7/10
closer: 6/10

overall: 52/80

good verses from both but i think deleon took this battle with better punches but he really needs to elevate on his structure its a verse not a story..put it in lines like juss blaze...i know what u talkin bout wit ya rhyme scheme juss blaze but when u use the same word twice and try to make them rhyme it doesnt work only because it's text if this was an audio it would be diff but in text it doesnt work and u did it too many times good verse

vote: deleon

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De got this good battle from both Juss I like your punches but De Came just a little bit harder with evry thing of his

Return da favor plz Da Solution vs. Spiky2k8

Damn this shit would be over but NoLost's vote disqualified
and The One didnt poll on this shit

come on yall drop your vote

uppin for tha people to drop their votes
lets get some more up in here

i don't no it was actully close i think it goes Deleon. i just liked the flow better then Juss_Blaze. but juss blaze put my name in his lol. goes to Deleon

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Aka you didnt vote
drop on tha poll dogg.............

someone blocked me from doing it on this battle fucking asses

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it worked the thrid time so it al good theres my vote deLeon

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