Collab 5/10-You had the structure and vocab...and stuff
tony 7/10-you had the harder punches...Nice battle for both

Tony did come harder with the punches...Return the favor in this thread will ya
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...606#post1260606

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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uppin please favors will be returned .......honest feedback please.

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CoIIab im giving this to you, ur flow was hott all the multis , you didnt have too many punches but the multis and flow made up for it

Tony.... yo shit was hott i think you had the structure side of the battle and punches

Keep elevatin yall !!!

Vote= CoIIab

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ComeON YALL 5 FUCKIN VOTES AINT HARD RIGHT DAMN I RETURN FAVORS ALL THE TIME SO HOLLA BACK.....................WUN

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both these verse musta been slapped together in seconds...tony..i aint feelin verses that are just boastin about i fucked ur chick last night.........u needa stay away from that..........
collab....the first few lines,i dont even know what u were talkin about or what was the purpose.........ur whole verse was all over the place man.....u need to have ideas connect..both verses were weak..but tony,he stuck to tellin a story...n u were all over the place...i dont really know on what else to judge it on...cuz neither one of u had any punches or anything......collab u ahd one line about escalator...but that is played as hell.......so both yall need to step it up but for this battle vote is for tony

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tony....u had sum decent punches and a couple hot hard hittin ones....fix ya structre....dont use //....too newbieish....flow was aight....work on wordplay too....jus elevate cuz ull get betta....
collab....now u had alot of weak punches....elevate there....flow wasnt that great....use personals and meta's.....go to tutorials and learn how to do ish....

Vote - tony for the more elevated verse

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

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