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Old 05-02-04, 10:31 PM   #1
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do world tours

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i entitle this i want to get rich from rap and do world tours

im rhymin' like a disease,
like a plague of worms engaging in eating your corpse,
let the body rot down to the last bone let it take its course,
dont hesitate the rap flow chillin through your illin full force,
im rhymin' like a disease,
peoples checkin me out im a stab them no remorse,
get so close its like we can have intercourse,
grabbin you in a headlock so you cant breathe no mores,
im rhymin' like a disease,
chronic taste so good i can feel it through my pores,
i got an eighth of weed so i need some mores,
the illin chillin villain enters the doors,
can feel the chronic from the ceilings to the floors,
vibrating faster than the vibrators whores,
yes you cant get this stuff in any stores,
yes i got this stuff from doing my chores,
but i want to get rich from rap and do world tours
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Old 05-03-04, 01:58 PM   #2
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dats pretty good.but you should add punchlines to your rap to make it more meaningfull
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