Yo yall niggas in the presenece of greatness//
When i'm round these kids i be in the presence of fakeness//
Please don't mistake yall ain't where I'm at//
Cuz truly I'm bout one step away from the black//
Album that is you know product of Jay Z//
What I look like letting you bitch niggas try and J me//
Your block my's block dog so get used to paying me//
My rhyme style be firm like A to Z//
I'm the type to strike when the feeling is calm//
Hard nose nigga with a snub nose in his palm//
Yall niggas get a clue and be introducing my songs//
Trying to put niggas on the shit that I'm on//
Don't need cheeleaders on the side but bring em on//
When I'm gone yall niggas gone miss me//
Cuz everyday i step little closer to history//

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yo what up fam this nigga is crazy he be the Most Hated Just like MillzReturn Yourself From The Belly Of The Beast
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Not to bad 5.5/10

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dats pretty good.7/10

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The Definition. period.

this is a sad piece.........it lacked every thing cept structure, you had bad vocab, bad rhymes, no good wordplay..no real emotion, this is bad.........2/10

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how this new nigga coming at me if you think you hot come at me bitch for real i don't be feeling this type of shit paper man cuz i'm bout this close to snatching yours.

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yo what up fam this nigga is crazy he be the Most Hated Just like MillzReturn Yourself From The Belly Of The Beast
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this was ok but u need to elevate a lil bit.....u need to try to get some more metas in your rhymes....the rhyme scheme was simple but it was effective....a couple of lines didnt flow real well but other than that i liked the piece...

6/10

keep elevatin

ceaser.........with rhymes like that i can tear you a new pussy real fast, so shut up..and kno when yur in the presence of illness

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dont be so mean! Dats was well gd lol

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