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lyrical an't real i'll steal this away like I just pinched his mumma/
my lyrics send you caturpulting till you reach the other side of the equater/
I hate this bitch he's gone im guna throw this bitch far gone, away for the longest period of time ever/
you must think your super man super fly guy who can't create lyrics/
i'll turn your lyrics in to hysterics like a big gas full of energy in one go/
im coming and going, leaving you behind, if i wait any longer for you, i'll be 35/
you get smacked n wiped up, flicked away like a swiss army knife/
I just fucked your wife she's having a ride of a time/ she can't get off my dick/
you've been crushed dissmantled tied from footsie to ancles, with broken specticals hidden, to make you more pissed than even more so/
this is my last verse, take this as a peice of advice, never ask for a battled again, cause i'll come flashing like colour code red/

fine mind ur lyircs so herb i use em for cookin',
Sign To dis and i still beat u wid out even lookin',
Your Lines more palyed than resess verb biter,
Tour Vocab once and it only took 2 secs slighter,
You can even contenplate his wackness to his rep,
Though wid his rhyme as his punch so week no intersept,
Atach His lyrics to a bird and they still wouldnt be fly,
Patch is his wordplay looks up but can only wish to be so high,
Fuck Dis bitch he aint worth my dopest metas and verbs,
Coz he cant diss me did a dictoinary wid all da words...

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lol @ "mumma"

aiyo dawg...catapult is spelled like that.


um...for real Fine Mind, I can see you workin hard to elevate...you might just be good one day man...4 real


you get smacked n wiped up, flicked away like a swiss army knife/
I just fucked your wife she's having a ride of a time/ she can't get off my dick/

^^^ that's ridiculous...
this is my last verse, take this as a peice of advice, never ask for a battled again, cause i'll come flashing like colour code red/

^^ wtf is up wit ur structure?...are u nagging or rapping?


ugh

fine mind ur lyircs so herb i use em for cookin',
Sign To dis and i still beat u wid out even lookin',
Your Lines more palyed than resess verb biter,
Tour Vocab once and it only took 2 secs slighter,
^^^ lol...pretty decent opener

...must be good to know you can relax and drop ya verse...

haha

Fuck Dis bitch he aint worth my dopest metas and verbs,
Coz he cant diss me did a dictoinary wid all da words...

^^^ eh closer...not bad


Vote: Lyrical Emcee...much better flow/structure/rhyming/punches

ugh

no sight fuck you. My lyrics were good and don't need you there to talk shit, you fucking bitch.

lol...wtf?!?

i voted dawg...not talked shit...just elevate...you might get good one day

and I'm not being mean dawg...

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fuck you, you'll never get good one day. Man you are such a bitch.

i'll vote on this right now if u vote on mine

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122340

fine:
spit: 5/10
punch:5/10
multi:5/10
overall:15/30
Your punches were aight..but still weak as hell...gotta put more thought into it aight..
oh yea dawg...u talk to much shyt..if you wanna battle..i'll battle you right now...
lyical:
spit:6/10
punch:6/10
multi:4/10
overall:16/30
aight you jst had enough to beat this newb..aight.dawg you spit was a lil wack cuz it was simple..but a lil original..like how ppl use to spit from a while ago...aight

vote lyrical

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122340

vote on this plz....

OKay SHT SHIT SHIT talkin all day dats what i dont due ahaha


yo Lyrical had some ill punches

Umm .. Fine mind u Had okay punches

Break down

lyrical
Flow 5/10
rhymes6/10
Structure 4/10
Multis 3/10
18/40

fine mind
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 6/10
multis 4/10
21/40

Weak BATTLE

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by the way im just battleing N shite, so i can put him at rest. Better read his shit b4 u judge this. I slaughtered him lol.

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