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05-05-04, 12:31 AM
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Here We Go Again
IP: 55F0 56BA
I cant believe how many niggas come on here wit lyrics that r abstruse
some niggas write like they got a dictionary in use but i dont need all that shit my rhymes r fatter than bruce bruce every rhyme i spit i leave u bemused ill belittle any nigga thats in my path im boorish to any nigga that wanna feel my wrath and ruthless to any nigga that wanna feel the gat shit in ya pants ill leave u elegiac yall niggas best duck when i cock back ill extricate ya life and not give a fuck heres a herald......nigga never buck cause if u run up chances r u will get done up
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest  
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05-05-04, 12:44 AM
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IP: B967 D26B
haha nice...so wht r u a chick or guy? cause if ur a chick u sure got the attitude of that i dont give a fuck im here 2 take u out...shit was mad coo..keep it up
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05-05-04, 01:14 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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pretty good work on ur structure though
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05-05-04, 08:24 AM
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IP: 40B2 4A8C
im a female homies and thanx for the props
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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05-05-04, 09:45 AM
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IP: 40B2 4A8C
i need some more feedback
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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05-05-04, 10:08 AM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: DD63 0FCA
sum good lines...almost like punches
work on structure and rhyme scheme...make it more complex decent for a short piece good vocab 1 |
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05-05-04, 10:33 PM
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IP: CC39 6945
holla @ ya girl wit some feedback n i promise ill return the favor
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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05-05-04, 11:22 PM
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IP: 0DCE 3504
"I cant believe how many niggas come on here wit lyrics that r abstruse
some niggas write like they got a dictionary in use"...nice punch..but "abstruse" seems a little "abstruse" itself. Just playin. I thought it was decent for being short though. work on the flow a little more..if you can nod your head while your writin, than you know that you got somethin. |
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05-06-04, 06:17 AM
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Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP: C1DA C961
nice lil piece....your structure needs work but everything else was pretty good.......6.5/10
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05-07-04, 08:36 AM
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IP: 40B2 4A8C
can i get some feedback
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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05-07-04, 08:50 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 0979 4FE9
yea, but can i get some votes on Mad Dog Vs BigNeks,
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05-09-04, 01:34 AM
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IP: 6250 E31F
uppin 4 some mo feedback
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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06-03-04, 06:11 PM
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IP: B3C5 6F0D
uuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppin
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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06-04-04, 09:14 AM
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.:Im Bac ... Fukk Wit me:.
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nice...
IP: 20E5 7F3C
ayo... sum iight shyt fo real. keep doin it namean? sum coo lines but ya flo sumtimes jus aint hit... like tha boal said jus nod ya head
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06-04-04, 09:40 AM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
yo beezy this is the first spit of urs ive ever seen and i was def feelin it keep it comin girl........................
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