ok, put i pm you too. we can get this squashed after this battle...wait you'll be banned

No i wont be banned , moron.
Because theres no such things as slips , as i posted
either way if there was i would not be banned no i dont want to say so please shut the fuck up .......
Voteeeeees.

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Not quite legendary yet....

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Im bout to test ur “Murderous Methods” nobility//--1
And at the same time prove my deadly versatility//--2
um..no punches there weak.........

Im an intelligent vigilant that no one can suppress//--3
But for you it aint the same, how can a “mask be Murderous”//--4
lol good hit at him.......masks ARE NOT murderous

How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5
Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6
ok i guess nothin spectacular

Ur verse is like “love letters” coz all they do is “miss me”//--7
pretty good u shoud've used this is the punch,NOT the set up line.......
n u should've said,ur PUNCHES are like love letters.......not verse

Dis battle is “uneven” like the eyes of “Shannon
Doherty”//--8<<ScareTactics
GAY

You couldn’t be “hot even if you were Satans right-hand-devil//--9
Even then you would be “too far south” to be anywhere near my level//--10
GAY

You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11
You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12
DONT LIKE THIS WORDPLAY ESPECIALLY THE FIRST LINE

im rippen this pussy, leavin him wet wit some diseases//--13
after this battle he will be banished like the jews did jesus//--14
GAY

listen kid, im not ur average vet, im invunerable against ur "D/R tactics"//--15
you couldnt drop shit if you were taking hits of "profolactics"//--16<<E-lax

prophylactic is condoms or a preventitive measure of some sort NOT exlax son............ closing is weak


Will SOME ONE PLEASE FIND THE PUNCHES IN YOUR VERSE
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Bitch back down , You lost to my member , so please tell me who stinks?
Ha, how you gonna battle the MM’s.. when ur elevating on the blueprints
doesnt make sense.......sucks

I wont use euhpusim you`ll sleep quick… Flash forward when you arm drops…
And you wont get up , Resurrection impossible … even with a alarm clock..
ummm....i see the content ,but i really dont think this is a hard punch at all......i think it sucks

Incredibly dumb , he came to my forum …calling me out , why?
When you made a thread in my forum…. Spelling banishment without an I…
SUCKS....not hard hitting........

Quote:
Originally Posted by LyriCal HavoK
nah i wanna battle him...and only him
and...i wont be the one leavin

^^^
You`ll leave and pack your bags & go …plus you bars are played.
This aint not games , if u wanna play .. Hop on old rb`s.. ARCADE.

OMG,THIS IS THE WORST LINE IN THIS BATTLE...IF U WANNA PLAY GAMES GO TO AN ARCADE? HAHA,U CANT BE SERIOUS

Quote:
Originally Posted by LyriCal HavoK
haha sorry i had to change something i forgot to change before i posted

unconfident bitch your 4 –1 , you`ll get whored son.. Man forget it…
At the previous post I laughted , minutes later.. Look How he edits..

GAY....word of advice...ppl use quotes to make their verse better,..here it made it ANNOYIN cuz it didnt prove SHIT..........n u overused it anyway

(his verse)
Quote:
Originally Posted by Phat Mic
oh shit,Lyrical is back...He's about to start murkin. lol. Lyrical Pm me when you can. This is gona be interesting.

I break necks , ^^ how u gonna be dope , when u get propped from fake-vets.
Murking Huh? If you stuck your dick up phats ass then gave him a pay-check.
WTF?kid u dont even make sense

Pulling you harder than a sling shot , Corrode you with all diseases..
Lyrical , Havoc . . that’s just wackness separated in two different pieces
umm..this is possibly ur best line.....n its still weak........

You`ve lost your rep , I`ve enhanced mine … So I know why you hate-it.
Claim you’re a vet? When your admitting that you suck to creativte.
sorry son,the link doesnt work...u should've quoted him here,not the other spellin shit n editing son..............would be a good personal,but cant be sure it actually happened.........




well,both verses are far from good........but,lyrical spit first......so u had the uppper hand mask......n he used ur name well in his verse,i'd say that was prolly the best line in this whole battle........n the love letter line,it needed work but it was ok...he had some weak wordplay,but its more than i can say for u.......u talked too much about editing n spelling n u quoted stuff till i got sick of readin ur shit,n that arcade line was so horrid,it took points away from u..............n ur closing could've helped u win,but the link aint workin so theres no proof,so imma have to rule that as a fake personal......so based on ur best line n his best...n ur gay arcade line no the non-working link......imma give this to lyrical......i'm out

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nice blacklisting me mask... i expect our battle

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aight yo check it

both of yall had some nice verses but lyrical just hit harder with his shit vocab was there and personals that scare tatics shit was gay though mm dropped a nice verse
too but his punches and personals just didnt hit as hard

vote=lyrical havok

drop an honest vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=122880&page=2

ok da idea of pasteing quotes is jus wackk 2 tell da truth lyrical came wit some vocab y u were usin baskic shit from quotes|


lyrical-

bestline-Im an intelligent vigilant that no one can suppress//--3
But for you it aint the same, how can a “mask be Murderous”//--4

nice

worsteline-none

overall yo verse gets a 9.6/10

mask

bestline-You`ve lost your rep , I`ve enhanced mine … So I know why you hate-it.
Claim you’re a vet? When your admitting that you suck to creativte.

dat was tite

worsteline-Bitch back down , You lost to my member , so please tell me who stinks?
Ha, how you gonna battle the MM’s.. when ur elevating on the blueprints


wack start

overall yo verse gets a 8.7/10

maybe its me but da quotes throw off yo flow

winner-lyrical

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you up'd your battle 20 fuckin times
you're gonna be DQ'd

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