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05-08-04, 01:10 AM
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A-Town
IP: B1C9 DAA4
My accuracy is accountable to abashing cats Abstruse acts, A-Bomb actions leave niggas abstract Acrimonious to the artery with the most advanced articles Assassinate assemblages with assembled deadly particles Activate acariasia,accredit me into the alliance Infect the young like acne, then lead them into defiance Ambidextrous fire arms standing amiss admidst Alongside altars,live and bleed, that proves life is a bitch Assholes aren't acceptable,Im greeted with acclaim at festivals Im accused of breaking down the best crews to the smallest decimal Acting like your muscle actin cant be subdused to actinogen Acrid by the acre, acrocentric bars,heard the acoustic again Adamant adolescence adapting to acts of God Automatic, acrobatic,acme ack-ack to the odd Agile agent, set apart the Allegheny Mountains Allegro allegories, revived in aliment fountains
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05-08-04, 03:40 AM
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IP: B1C9 DAA4
some replies would be great!
now give them to me thank you!
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05-09-04, 01:26 AM
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IP: 6250 E31F
i like it, ya vocab was on point, ya structure was on point but u need to get a topic an stay on it
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05-09-04, 01:28 AM
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yeah
IP: 6250 E31F
i like it, ya vocab was on point, ya structure was on point but u need to get a topic an stay on it
check out my post here we go again
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest
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05-09-04, 01:57 PM
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IP: AF57 62CB
^idiot
the topic was me constanly using the letter "A" Thats why its called A-Town!
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05-09-04, 08:11 PM
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05-09-04, 08:35 PM
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IP: 79D3 817A
was this spit about atl or you.....well as far as creativity goes thumbs up cuz the A's all the way through was good..but if u were to record this it wouldn't be like a "hit single" industry wise...but the vocab was overly well meaning ppl have to go back and re-read to much..u wanna make ppl think..but not get headaces....Uno*
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05-10-04, 03:04 PM
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damn
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damn, that shit was fuckin hot, ain't seen shit like that since school with the crazy english teachers comin up wit "fun" projects but u pulled that off. gotta give ya props
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05-11-04, 06:42 PM
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IP: 59C1 BD9C
uppin for some more replies
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05-11-04, 06:58 PM
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good shit son
IP: 00AF 249C
yo good shit the vocab was crazy deep,nice topic and frame but it came in and out of flow,your rythm was off jus ah little but other than that good shit B keep it movin-1-
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05-11-04, 07:06 PM
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IP: 59C1 BD9C
yes
but, if you was to hear me say it it would have a decent flow to it I write all my raps to a beat and this goes with a beat but thanks for the feedback!
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05-11-04, 07:53 PM
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IP: A9E6 ED1C
yo man that shit was sick but it sounded like the Alphabetical Slaughter that Papoose spits on DJ Kay Slays newest mic tape..........just a thought......
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05-11-04, 09:03 PM
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IP: 59C1 BD9C
I made this before that mixtape came out
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05-12-04, 11:34 AM
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IP: 2E21 CC95
o aight then
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05-12-04, 03:18 PM
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IP: 6C8E 5424
kinda shit man, u just using smart words or trying to at least and making thwese medioke lines
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