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Old 05-08-04, 08:12 PM   #1
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its real in the field (feedback if you now its real)

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ayo,
it's a war, so be ready, cuz my 4's comin' heavy/
put a 4 on ya door, add 3 more and you got Lucky/

in the fast lane, i learn to hold my heat tight/
smokin a cigerrete with a tall can, stumblin under a street light/

i be on the 800 block most of the time/
and you can catch me with a back pack, thats totin' my nine/

it aint a joke so why assume im an act.../
i hate to be rude, but i'll react and stick a long broom in ya ass/

i live the hood life/
dont get slapped for steppin on my good nikes/
women pass me, they gotta look twice/
cuz i'll be beatin guts quicker then asian niggas cook rice/
i gotta all black device/
that could drastically change your life/

in a matter of seconds, im blastin with weapons/
im the reason you poor 40 ounces out, for ya homies thats restin/
come at me? come with protection/
ya man, i'll wreck him/
dont hesitate to confront me if im drunk and punchin his chest in/
say goodbye to ya best friend/

im a wild adolescent/
my attitude is pay me/
aint workin 8 hours a day, i smoke weed an im lazy/
unless it involves money crazy/
and then im shady/
cock the heat and pray that nobody thinks im jokin when i spray heat/
aint shootin moms wit babys/
spittin this shit ta Dre's beats/
rippin in front of a crowd that do nuthin but prase me/
last time i rolled without a strap a bullet grazed me/
now im bustin Deagles at muthafuckers thinkin im playing/

im one time rapper, meaning i only bust once/
duck chumps, im comin to ya door, and fuck lunch/

tell ya moms ta save the sandwich and put the milk on hold/
cuz i just left from the local Phat Burger, and im blowd/
so you know im holdin dro/

what you need Lucky got it/
treat that fake act like i do my albums cuz homie you need ta drop it/
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i aint no 'sweet studd', im a 'street thug'/
that's quick ta beat a nigga like a 'cheap rug', until he 'leave blood'/ - Big L

I'm goin' 'all out', i tear the 'wall out', i'll knock you 'all out'/
you couldn't grip somethin' heavy unless you pulled my 'balls out'/ - Lucky

people tell me im 'mad-nice', but i take it in strife/
cuz while you had a bad day, I had a 'bad-life'/ - Lucky
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Old 05-08-04, 08:46 PM   #2
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A Dogg that wuz some weak ass shit. You need to sit down and to a few pointers from me bitch, so if you want it bring it.
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Old 05-08-04, 09:12 PM   #3
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Yo, while you in tha house thinking bout good lines, I'm on tha block smoking and drinking having a good times.
Rhyming to me is like selling some dope chop it up bag it up and sell it to ya folks. You don't have to tell me i'm hot and your not, cause when i'm finish your head gon be full of nots.......




16BARS aKa T-MAc (Bring tha real shit)

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Old 05-08-04, 09:34 PM   #4
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Hey, lucky 7, u got some sick flows goin on there. Fuck what 16bars or whatever says. That fool sux ass anywayz!! Peace Out!
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Old 05-08-04, 09:54 PM   #5
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yea im already knowin. this nigga aint hood. i got somethin for his ass tho just wait and see.
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i aint no 'sweet studd', im a 'street thug'/
that's quick ta beat a nigga like a 'cheap rug', until he 'leave blood'/ - Big L

I'm goin' 'all out', i tear the 'wall out', i'll knock you 'all out'/
you couldn't grip somethin' heavy unless you pulled my 'balls out'/ - Lucky

people tell me im 'mad-nice', but i take it in strife/
cuz while you had a bad day, I had a 'bad-life'/ - Lucky
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Old 05-08-04, 10:02 PM   #6
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here go's soem quotes from that rap for this cat 16bars...my shit real homie.


it aint a joke so why assume im an act.../
i hate to be rude, but i'll react and stick a long broom in ya ass/



...in other words, i aitn fake and if you want it imma bring it fuul force.'


gotta all black device/
that could drastically change your life/



...i aint gotta tell you what im talkin...if you hood you should already know.


last time i rolled without a strap a bullet grazed me/
now im bustin Deagles at muthafuckers thinkin im playing/



...you cant do nutin to me that aint happend before. dont take me as a joke.


treat that fake act like i do my albums cuz homie you need ta drop it/


...for reals.
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i aint no 'sweet studd', im a 'street thug'/
that's quick ta beat a nigga like a 'cheap rug', until he 'leave blood'/ - Big L

I'm goin' 'all out', i tear the 'wall out', i'll knock you 'all out'/
you couldn't grip somethin' heavy unless you pulled my 'balls out'/ - Lucky

people tell me im 'mad-nice', but i take it in strife/
cuz while you had a bad day, I had a 'bad-life'/ - Lucky
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Old 05-08-04, 10:09 PM   #7
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Right on, tear that motha fucka up! lol. Tight rhymes fool, u get props.
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Old 05-08-04, 10:16 PM   #8
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oh that aint tearin him up...imma save that for when im drunk tonight if i hop on....its gon be a 16bar diss....when we ride on our enemies type a shit....check me out homeboy.
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i aint no 'sweet studd', im a 'street thug'/
that's quick ta beat a nigga like a 'cheap rug', until he 'leave blood'/ - Big L

I'm goin' 'all out', i tear the 'wall out', i'll knock you 'all out'/
you couldn't grip somethin' heavy unless you pulled my 'balls out'/ - Lucky

people tell me im 'mad-nice', but i take it in strife/
cuz while you had a bad day, I had a 'bad-life'/ - Lucky
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Old 05-08-04, 10:22 PM   #9
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Ight, ill do that, ill check that out if u do that tonite, but imma be blazed off my ass tonite too, so imma be lookin for somebody to rap battle, so if u know anyone who needs a burning, send them my way, ight.
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Old 05-08-04, 11:09 PM   #10
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Ahh...decent peice not the greatest...I will let this one slide a bit since you are pretty new...pretty tite for someone as new as you, but if you want to get really good at this shit, look at someone who has some experience in this shit...your flow was coo...its just ya ryhmes I wasn't feelin'...keep at it dawg...

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