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GKillaz05 5 62.50%
raw talent 3 37.50%
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Old 05-09-04, 06:23 PM   #16
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Yo,this was a hot battle.When I read GKillaz's verse(which was not as good as his other's)I was like "Damn,he won this",but then Raw came with this nice verse then I was like DAMN!


GKillaz-Nice flow/structure as usaul.Punches were not as hard as ur other verses.But still good.The only problem with it,was that it was simple.
Best line-This guy should copy his whole verse and press delete...
Take a seat and watch me give him his second defeat...
Worst Line-Im a Magician they way I pull these punches outta my sleeve...
You might not belive it but everyone wants you to leave...
^^see,this was what I was talking about when I said you were simple

Raw-another hot verse.Flow was good,but better by GKillaz.Punches were nice as well.
Best Line-Nice sig dogg, behind the times, update your shit...
Stop reppin DP, beggin her for votes, ridin her clit...
Worst line-none

Overall-Hard choice but Raw got this.But I must say.But GKillaz,I could see this was not ur best.I don't know if you underestimated Raw,....but RAW came hard.

Vote-RAW
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Old 05-09-04, 06:28 PM   #17
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iight.. honest vote.. keep em comin' peepz.. UPPIN for VOTES
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Old 05-09-04, 06:37 PM   #18
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break doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooown

gkilla um that opener was pretty stupid maybe reword it and use it against him but um it was a self glorifcation line an it aint work to well an ya closer wasnt fealin it either again not well worded and ja rule aint sorry just to let you know wo no points there either but the rest of your verse was pretty good the middle stayed pretty consistent wit good punchs and personals had a good flow to it to nice drop overall

raw talent or who ever you are under that alias your opener was nice decent punchs and all and the closer was decent tried a personal didnt fully connect to me but the rest of your verse was average a few personals and punchs didnt really see any that stood out to me just average punchs that stayed consistent ya verse just lacked creativitie and strong punchs not bad though

vote gkillaz
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Old 05-09-04, 06:37 PM   #19
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ok i think g under estimated raw but i belive he still won
gkillaz05
punches 8/10
flow 8/10
structure 8/10
overall*8*
bestline:
This guy should copy his whole verse and press delete...
Take a seat and watch me give him his second defeat...
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raw
punches/7/10
flow 8/10
strcutuer 8/10
overall *7.5*
bestline:-Nice sig dogg, behind the times, update your shit...
Stop reppin DP, beggin her for votes, ridin her clit...
my vote gkillaz
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Old 05-09-04, 06:48 PM   #20
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aight honest vote rite here

opener-g even tho dat shit was weak..raw u should made ya shit more harder..pause
structure- a tie
punchlines-g
creativity-g
multi's-nun
personal's-g...da anme flip was hott
enjoyed-g...he got dis shit he went harder and he took all catagories...raw ya shit wasn't wack u just need a few more battles tthen you'll get da hang of dis battlin shit

my vote-g
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122964
^^^^link 2 my battle rite can y'all pleez return da honest vote...GON
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Old 05-09-04, 07:14 PM   #21
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Opener- Tie you both had some nice openers
Flow- Another close call but Raw
Punches- I'ma go with Raw here as well but it was pretty close, you both threw alot and they all stuck but I think his hit harder
Personals- Close call but Killaz with breaking down the RAW
Complexity- Kept it simple but pretty good this time
Mettas- RAW takes this one with the some nice lines in the mid of his verse
Finisher- Raw cause it was more concise
Overall- Raw takes this one, very close battle expect it to go 4-4
Vote- Raw
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Old 05-09-04, 07:21 PM   #22
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iight another good HONEST VOTE! ... keep em comin.. no shit un-explained ones plz!!
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Old 05-09-04, 08:26 PM   #23
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Both Verses Good.. Raw talent, Can spit first time i seen him, but he had good Punchlines and Structure, good flow

Killas verse was DOpe as well also good structure, FLow n Puinchlines.. weak opening but the rest cover's it

It's a Hard choice.. but i'ma ahve to go with Gkilla... His shit juss standed out more

V/Gkilla
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Old 05-09-04, 08:34 PM   #24
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raw talent takes this.....he came with some force......his punches landed very well.....g killaz u had a few good lines but u need to work on wording your bars to make them more effective.......and u both should try to get some better personals in your verses.....

v/raw
 
Old 05-10-04, 08:46 AM   #25
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Pleaze Take Time And Vote On MY Battle

+Krario Vs. NY State Of Mind+


This Battle Waz Close But I Know Who Came Up With More Blows

GKilla Did Good And His Flow Waz Kinda Good

Raw Talent Waz Good Also But U Had 2 Try More Harder

My Honest Rating...
Opener...GKilla
Flow...GKilla
Blows...GKilla
Lyricism...Gkilla
Finisher...GKilla

Good Battle, GKilla

Raw Talent Needs 2 Jab More Harder Then That 2 Win A Match

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