Yo Yo Yo

I'm that latin who uses his voice for purpose/ I spit those verses/ i made the room hot ya walk around shirtless/i battle emcess with punchlines and curses/i spit hot shit never refurbished/i rise among the fakes like explosions coming from under the surface//

i spit fire to you the masses i toast over ya ashes/ enemies come at us/ we prepare when we grab the matches/ cause i'm so hot i go off like bombs set off by arabics/ sporadic when i spit fantastic when i ripped it/ take the mic and hand it cause i'm already finished//

well alright...Im kinda bias cuz i love latino guys BUT:

ur rhyme scheme was good to me but some ppl would get bored with it becuz it's a lil to repetitive and u have no multies in the middle of ur rhymes...that would make it better..

this was 2 bars so it wasn't really much to go off of..but ur directions was clear through out the entire spit...it was ok for ur first spit on of ur first spit on here keep elevating pa *dueces*

SB

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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

Thanx for the feedback...

And what a small world....i like people who like latinos?

nice ass flo i liked it...nice word complexes and flo material...BIG PUN....