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Old 05-10-04, 04:27 AM   #1
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Cool first flow

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Yo this is my first flow on ha site

my names graphex/i break like harlem shakes and backflips/ spittin flows around the atlis/dippin in h0es on tha matriss/i got mack spits that spread a million miles/ in a million places/ that put a millions smiles/on a million faces/
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Old 05-10-04, 07:37 AM   #2
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S'Aiight, not the best though. Could have used better words in some places, but keep it up man,
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Old 05-10-04, 08:45 AM   #3
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not a very good drop. seemed like you could have put a little more work into it instead of dropping it as a four bar flow. there was no topic and no concept in it. this i hope is not the best you can do. next time put some time and thought into what you're trying to say and i'm sure you'll get better results. keep practicing man.
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Old 05-10-04, 12:17 PM   #4
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well its was like 4 in tha mornin and i was high, so ill do better next time
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Old 05-10-04, 12:38 PM   #5
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no sweat dude. no need for excuses. i'm not dissing you man. just letting you know that i'm sure this ain't your best. just keep at it. and for your sakes, don't drop when you're high. we can see what happens when you do. lmao. j/p.
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Old 05-10-04, 02:23 PM   #6
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nice

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yo u got mad creativity in that verse if nothin else, shit didnt flow that well and in text these cats love structure so dont be afraid of the enter key, ahit shows you got potential even if you were high
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