16 line MAXIMUM

no crew/hate/dr vote

no verse feeding


please son, drop sumthin decent...lol


check in and spit 1st...i'll soon follow


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ive checked in m8 can it be ten lines only, it's your call though

sure...i said 16 MAX. that means that's the highest amount you can drop.

do 10...

ayo n sight your so blinde, you need to find the light before you can rap/
you keep saying you have talent, more like a comic like chris tarent/
this guy is smokin his own piss instead of weed an't got no money to feed/
your a tradgedy who came out at birth unready, no brain just damn lame/
see this guy is scared when i rap, cause he's just lured into one big trap/
like a trawler watchng you crawl in the corner of netting/
these words are intenderly to hurt you, to put you down, like a needle surringe killing you/
i'll string you down by coller bone, string your neck between a telephone wire
watching you choking, it's driving you bizerk, till i start seeing foam poring out, like a fucking fit/
you can't stand a womans bush, when you get btween the virgina it's all a blush/
rushing n dashing away like you've got a desease eating you/

Pssh...aiyo,

First off,

Who tha fuc eva heard of 'popa doc'..popa got sum nerve to bite vets..-
U a cross between 'Biggie' and 'Dre'?..nah, just a light speck..-(big poppa/dr. dre)
Weren't u the kid PM'in me..talkin' fag shit 'bout your 'bi-ways'..-
I got more '5'0s behind me' than O.J. 'runnin' on the high-way'..-
Nigga, it's my way..or 'none' leavin' you holier than left edges..- (nun/notebook paper)
Cats don't 'read ur text for meaning'..jus 'look in my hand to see where ur head is'..-
WTF!?!, kid ur 'out of place' like 'Janet breast'..and dis is rap superbowl..-
So I'm 'Just' in time' to expose you..ur 'cold-shit' more 'bear' than 'Poo n snow'..-(poo bear)
Wouldn't you know..they throwin' fresh meat out for vets to eat up..-
I wuzn't all dat hungry..but u was all they had left you weak fuck..-


get the FUCK OUTTA HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUR!

n sight..

n sight takes this one he came with more complexity and more creativity popa doc just stayed with the same simplicity you but need to use more punches but n sight still takes this one...

vote n sight...

hit up my battle wit d bate or phat mic link in da sig

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Popa doc's stuff doesn't make sense. Smoking piss? "you can't stand a womans bush, when you get btween the virgina it's all a blush" - weak. He seems to have good ideas for disses but can't put them together into a nice punchline. Flow was OK... no multis or metas to speak of.

.:N-Sight:. didn't really have a great flow but he made up ofr that with creativity and wordplay. The whole thing about Janet's breast and "Just" was ill. He also had punches that hit hard. Only thing is I think explaining your punches is weak... you shouldn't have to explain them. If someone doesn't get them they can look it up. hell, I was talking about a mobius strip in one of my rhymes.

Vote is for N-sight.

http://community.rapbattles.com/forumdisplay.php?f=6

thats fucking bull shit man, your a load of dick riders, N sight didn't have a fucking flow, he sucked.

I don't want to freepost here, but dude re-read your verse. It was awful. And I'm not hating, just a few mins ago I voted for you in some battle. I vote for the better verse I could give a shit who wrote it.

::..N - sight whipped n ripped tha shit outta popa DOC homie

n sight

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 7/10
Multis 6/10
28/40

Popa Doc

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 4/10
multis 2/10
16/40

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Free Agent

ya...i agree with the explainin shit...iono why I do it..cuz I tell otha people not to...

'preciate da votes tho


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ding ding ding, did I hear a knock out. All because of a hardhitter named N-sight beat the fuck outta popa doc, uhm uhm uhm, yes I did. Its obvious that Sight had better over"all" than doc.
v/N-Sight

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lol...my flow was hella better than yours


fuck outta huuuuuur

fuck you bitch, u dick rider. You's was wackness.