I take this rhyme one stage at a time/
Spit lyrics like grime that fuck with ya mind/
Take one look at you an take out my 9/
This is an ok punch
Blast holes in ya shirt have ya land on the dirt/
Lyrically you'sa flirt, go to cook-outs in skirts/
Givin rim-jobs that hurt, to ya cousin kurt/
It was good till you got to his cousin kurt
I spit lyrics to prophecise the end of ya days/
Make way for the slayer in you practical gay/
Not really a punch
To beat you ain't no competition at all/
You like a midget playin basketball, it won't work at all/
I liked this one
I spit to enthrall the over confident nigga with a piece/
Can't fight with his mind so he always got beef/
Eh, not much to say
Nigga ya shit is see-through, like all'a ya teeth/
When I kick 'em out wiv my studs an fill ya with grief/
THis is aiight for a punch
Break ya legs an then ya arms, an leave ya on a beach thats calm/
Wait for high tide ta see ya body ride out to sea/
And slowly drown ya, in my preverbial dream/
Mediocre closing


in ur second line u say u i spit lyrics like grime
Why is this in here?
u a retard mk that doesn't even work
den u later u spit crap about a my a cousin called kurt
Choppy as fuck and no point
please tell me ur joking...that can't be a lyrical assault
u called me a midget playing b-ball...you call that an insult
Still watin for tha punch
it's confusing/ this wigga be using/ random words, and still think i'm losing
u need to rethink your "punches" u be using
FINALLY!!! a punch, but it was weak
cause your lyrics are crap and have no effect
but then again what can you expect
Weak-assed punch
from a man who took advice from micheal jackson
after a heated round of gang bang action
Jacko is overplayed man, its an aiight punch tho
cause this pathetic shit was ment to b freestyle
came from a man who was abused as a child
riiiiight
using a signature This ain't a game it's a way of life
well let me end your game while u meet my knife
Good punch
and do rapbattles a favour...please ur mum's impregnater-s
I dont think thats a word....
none of them wanted u, u were a mistake
and no one thought that the condom would brake
Ok closer

Aiight for spittin second, More L did a horrible job. It got better towards the end, and all you did was feed, AND BADLY AT THAT!!

More L-4/10
guyver4mk-7/10

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guyver4mk nice verse. you overpowered this guy. nice punches and structure. for a newbe that was a nice flow. nice punches, try to put better mult's in your verses next time. nice battle cuz, keep it up.return the fava

vote=guyver4mk

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guyver i felt won this battle

structure:guy
flow:guy
personals:l
overall:guyver

can you guys return the fava vote on the battles on my sig and i'll return the fava

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guy
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 7/10

more
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 5/10

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more l had better punches had a better opener and finish so im uppin 4 more L peace out !!!

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blah! have to go with Guyver on this better rhymes in there
better punches, flow, vocab well everything in Guyver's drop
was much better than More L did..................................

do a honest vote on my shit the link's in the signature

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