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SPuL 4 44.44%
L.I. 5 55.56%
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Old 05-12-04, 06:29 PM   #16
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Close battle y'all....Spul you had a good opener it was the highlight of ya verse, your closer was tight too, you had some filler shit in there though, your vocab was alrite, you had a few solid multies in there, wordplay could use some work, metas were ok, could have been a better drop, but not bad.

L.I. this could have been a good batt;le for you, but you had to do that corny AIM shit, that killed your whole verse in my opinion, you took wack to another level wit that shit, an this ain't no hate its just that you should have thought about that one, I mean you had some solid punches especially your closer but that bullshit killed any chance you had of winning this shit
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Old 05-12-04, 06:32 PM   #17
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ok nice drops by both emcees yall did it real tight

LI-nice punches and using the beginig of every sentence but u said no feeding and it looked like u fed in yo verse but on and off

bestline-Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs...
People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb...

hott as start

worsteline-C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet...
Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat...

^^^ not a bad verse but it looked liek u fed from his verse maybe iss juss me but iuno dass yall problem

spul-nice drop flow was sick added wit punches homie

bestline-You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do
Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you

niceee

worsteline-none but vocab wasnt a factor in yo verse but usin you and dat type ish at da end was cool wit yo flow cuz it was titez

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open-9.7/10
punches-9.5/10
flow-9.2/10
structure-10/10
consitant verse-9.6/10
vocab-9.3/10
creattivity-9/10
close-8.7/10
overall-9.3/10

spul-
open-9.7/10
punches-9.4/10
flow-9.4/10
structure-10/10
consitant verse-9.5/10
vocab-8.7/10
creattivity-9.1/10
close-9/10
overall-9.4/10

winner-spul
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Old 05-12-04, 06:33 PM   #18
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aiight, 3-3 uppin' for votes.
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Old 05-12-04, 06:48 PM   #19
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lol i didnt fuckin feed.......i had my concept all written down before he dropped......i'd admit it if i did....but i didnt......up.........
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Old 05-12-04, 06:55 PM   #20
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ok hot drops by both guys...

Ok i'm not gonna breakdown for each i'm gonna give an overall thing for both of you... ok L.I. takes flows in this one...his multies where bad ass... but punches where takin by spul... even though spul did hit with his punches L.I.'s punches where mad personasl Including the AIM convorsation... Battles are judged on by creativty... L.I. had spelled out Spul is Wack and te aim convo and makin fun of it is pretty damn creative

Spul 8/10
L.I. 9/10

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Old 05-12-04, 09:40 PM   #21
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^um, yea, thanks for the feedback, but crew votes aren't allowed. Yea, I guess I gotta PM strobe now.
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Old 05-13-04, 07:43 AM   #22
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Old 05-13-04, 12:05 PM   #23
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Damn, good battle, I dunno who won yet, Ima take these catergories honestly, and then we'll all find out.

Flow: Damn, Ima give that a tie, Spul was good, L.I.'s was sick, usin' Spul's shit and all, but the aim conversation fucked it up a bit.
Punches: L.I. his shit's was HARD, liked the hockey line
Multis: L.I. had 1 or2
Personals: Spul Closer killed it
Vocab: Even
Opener: L.I. Fuckin' sick
Closer: Spul ^^^^^

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Hmm… L.I.… there really WASN’T a good meanin’ for that
But after this battle is through… it’ll be acknowledged as the Loser Impact

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u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky…
Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey…

Y'all both came madd hard, that's the kinda battle I expected. L.I. barely takes this one with one more category than Spul, nice job both of y'all.

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Old 05-13-04, 05:14 PM   #24
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Ok here. You guys knoe me, I dont do really long explanations, but anyways.

SpuL- nice verse, Funny opener...Chuckled a lil. You're punches were nice, but the MM thing... Eww, cmon man.You're closer was, alright... A different look at his name. The aim stuff isn't really a good way to get punches because like someone said earlier, people say a lot of weird shit on aim... Overall, nice punches and a good opener.... I hope he jumps you for that 5 bucks ... hah j/p

LI- A nice structure and good creativity, though SpuL has done this before. You had some good wordplay and punches. The aim thing is wack, but you used it better then he did. I cant beleive he TOLD you one of his lines... haha. But anyways, Overall... Good punches, creativity and your opener was nice too. Aim... WaCKKK!

Alright, this was close, and i liked the battle. This was down to punches, because the opener we both pretty nice. I think LI came harder with the punches. It was a really fair match up here. Good battle guys.

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Old 05-13-04, 05:26 PM   #25
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upping...........
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Old 05-13-04, 07:13 PM   #26
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never mind, uppin'

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Old 05-14-04, 08:40 PM   #27
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yo, uppin' this ish.
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Old 05-15-04, 12:21 PM   #28
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Old 05-15-04, 12:41 PM   #29
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spul your opener was pretty nice good set up line helped out the punch good opener your closer wass a nice personal but better things for l.i though lol good wording in it to and the rest of your verse had a bunch of personals the aim lingo was pretty soft punch the treason line was sick lmao damn overall i was fealin about half your verse brah tight verse the aim shit is what was your downfall

l.i your opener was nice good wordplay and punch and a concept not used much your closer was nice to good way to point that out that he uses that style way to much and the rest of your verse was nicely worded not so much used concepts and good personals good job of putti nthe convo part in it instead of just sayin the verse nobody would have got it tight verse as well but you get my vote for being more consitent with your personals and punchs i felt

tight battle sons this is why people should battle on there own level shit is actually worth readin and keeps attention

vote l.i no hate either even after i read that aim convo lol

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what the fuck spul he is`nt in our crew get the vote back?
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damn this was a good battle..too bad i couldn't vote cuz we crew ..aight..i gotta give this one to Spul...his shyt was tite...even u L.I....jst i felt that spul had hella better punches...ummm.....i'm to lazy to type other stuff...jst uppin this shyt...lolz
 
 


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