actually that was nothing like a poem....lol...ive seen her name around her i noticed she got a lot of mouth but whateva...t-lite on just spit we in the same crew wit all mind...and i was saying your nice but not the best...so stay up n hit me up cuz i actually lost the link to that site...and if you not postin there i might not cuz its not jumpin over there so holla t lite and stay up spoken

It Was "Safe" .. Alright SpokenBluntly' .. You have Potential!!!! No Doubt!!

Stay ^

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u see^^i thank you and this is not even my drop for the simple fact that you show love to other femcees...its already crazy to gain respect with all the males ...but to have females hatin is ridiculous and you gave feedback and told what u felt not just wack, yall need to give what ppl can improve on na mean so much respect to you disaster

No Doubt!! ... Lemme Hit Diss Up One More Time!!

I Say It Was A Nice Peice....

You Could Improve On Your Structure, And Verse Though!!!.. It Was Kind Of Off Balance No Hate Just A Peice Of Advice!!!!

Work On Your Vocabulary' But Asides From That!! It Looks Like You Improving!! Just Need To Elevate Some' And From There On Everything Is A Go!! BabeGyal !!

Keep Your Head Up!!!.. And Stay ^

-Out-

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lol thanks for ur advice...but i won't change my structure at all...that's a signature style..and I won't change it but ur other opinions was good...this was basically to see if any femcee's would call me out.....****.....lol UPPIN


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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

Sho' Ill Call You Out!

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Let it be said Let it be done--set it up--spit--and i'll respond....*OUT*

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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

some hot shit homie

nice looking out *UPPIN*

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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

no thanks.....

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us waiver, waiver, us entry waiver, criminal record travel, denied entry us

god damn ill give feedback
ok ur bars r stretched and uneven as fuck ur flow was off a lil in resulkt of the structure
ur lines r played dont hit very hard but r ok
ur vocab could use a lil work but is ok
and im not hatin thats my opinion that u need elevation
ur not the best lk is better im better youngstar was better and i dont no who t lite is

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Umm...this needs a little betta structure.

I say umm interesting piece. Could be done betta.

Overall 6/10.

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Tittle: For The Love Of Womens by Me & LoT

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lol well hey some think im better...some think im not..thats the way i like it..but thanks for ur replys i can work on vocab..but im not a "real net emcee" i don't try to use "big words" to make my spits seem "elevated"--in a real freestyle..i won't work lol and the structure ain't changing either..but hey i'll take ur suggestions in consideration...and ayo im still waiting for ol girl to set up the battle..lmao GET AT ME

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Seemed pretty cool to me
The flow fell at times. But, in all actuality I cant really say that cuz i dont know what flow you had in mind. The vocab was good. Work on multies a little and you should be fine. I must say you're not the best...but you not far from it, ma! Keep doin' you