I can tell you dont kno what to do
so when you rap be ready for a critical review
use other lines that redefine your style
bring somethin knew that people havent heard in a while
i grip glocks that make you shell shocked
like in the morning when you jump to the sound of an alarm clock
bust shots in parking lots in tons of spots
i live in a drug infested spot
and i hit the spot like Jason Kidd's jump shot


tell me what you think or just give me some advice.

I think u need more work, but over all it was straight!!!!
By the way u want to battle?

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ok lets go

Ah bro this is a prime example on what you need to work on if this is really yours then you can see the potential

^^^thanks for the posts