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Old 05-13-04, 04:45 AM   #1
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What Are You Paying For

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Not freeposting or anythihng. here's a few free verses ive done. have a peep, see what you think.

She’s despised, so she hides from the society that rejected her//
She’s so high, with glazed eyes that on this ride, she’s just a passenger//
Flashing her treasure on street corners like a busker for cash//
Fucking for crack, suckin for smack, always something she lacks//
Never honey, darling or sweetie, just skank, slut, bitch and ho//
No teddy bear, just dildo, every day she’s further from riches though//
Forced to bear the brunt of old men’s lust, frustration and anger//
Lustin to bang her, no talking, that’s the rule, but how about sex with a stranger?//
Death is no danger, it’s a friend. Did it come with OD or murder by strangulation?//
A community embarrassment, so there’s no further investigation//
Never got to drive, have friends, or be flower girl at a wedding//
Nobody at the funeral, no mourning, no friends that are shedding//
New tears, alone in a six foot casket, a foot for every two years//
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Old 05-14-04, 07:40 AM   #2
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Old 05-14-04, 10:02 AM   #3
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Nicee...Good Story Rap Makka...Its Very deep.......!!
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Old 05-14-04, 10:32 AM   #4
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Damn dat's deep Mackka... Good shit homie
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Old 05-14-04, 12:36 PM   #5
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tatz some shit yo I like cause u breakin it down bout wat a hoe goes through & shit. shit was tight then u added some vocab on it
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Old 05-14-04, 01:21 PM   #6
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Uppin!

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