strength

Shallow grave dug within my own poisoned mind
Demons take flight within the recollected prisms
Shards of crystal to impale the fated heart sorrowed
Rainbowed against the steel of a stone pressed soul
pray to the gods he does not blemish me
Close the mausoleum door upon my comatose body
Lifeless as your words strangled me into harsh hypnotism
A breath shallowed by vengeance and fighting flames
Apathy drifting my tears to the oceanic ebb of time
please understand I tried to be the best I could
Chaotic gleams of indecision twist the cry of echoes
Anger, hostility, love, sorrow entwine the fragments left
Barbed wire form the halo you strategically placed raged
Cries of weeping willows taint the breeze with shrillest yawns
you played your role as well, I’m not solely to blame
Tears like gasoline fuel the emblazed instinct within me
Fight or flee seem null to void when encompassed in rusted chain
Fingertips shall wear to bone and blood to release the locks

yo yall hit this shit up its hott....pc

Again flash this is quite deep and the verse is real good props to ya peace

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

thanks uppin for somemore feedback please....leave links to either this and i will leave feedback or to a battle and i will hit it up wit an honest vote

uppin this shit for somemore feedback comon peep

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c'mon peep.................FEEDBACK

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Props where props is due... nice flow.. and a pretty deep piece... write some more shit like that man...~1~

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