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Old 05-14-04, 04:15 PM   #1
Adroit
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Exclamation shamira vs Adroit

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heres the rules:

no hate votes

10 bars

first to 4 votes


this is my first battle so i think these rules will work. ill spit first
 
Old 05-14-04, 04:19 PM   #2
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there is also another rule that i found that i think we should use:

you cant vote for yourself
 
Old 05-14-04, 04:25 PM   #3
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ok here is my 10 bars:

your like a building and your friends are too
cause every guy gets up and inside of you
whats your name again Shamira?
your raps is so bad I thought you were Shakira
come on u dont remember me?
i'll run your brain around the block to jog your memory
i stomped your man so unless you want what he got
You better set the mic down I'm steaming like a teapot
You slithering snake gibbering fake fibbering flake
I'll twist you into a different shape
 
Old 05-14-04, 04:27 PM   #4
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okay im finished so its your turn to spit something
 
Old 05-14-04, 04:48 PM   #5
In-Vision
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yo vote on this and i'll return the favor..thanks'

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120082
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Old 05-14-04, 05:37 PM   #6
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Checking in!!!

This dude swear he sick, he fucked with the wrong chick, I’m known to make cats like him be like ja and suck dick//
My voice is like guns; yours is like bullets I spit for fun, making this nigga get a asma attack like big pun//
To me your like range, I picked u cause I want to give u pain, fucking with me will keep ya head spinning like those G-unit chains//
See that’s why I told this cat not to push me, that’s like licking Oprah’s ass to get a cookie, u fucking pussy//(what the fuck)
U like my style, that’s what makes u go wild, but I’m not the bitch to be opening up doors for new people like destiny child//
Making a living off of u cause u like a shrimp, fucking with this female pimp, your ass is worth half of 50, fucking 25cents//
U want my beats, even want me to show u the way in the streets, instead I stay away from u like a disease, u fucking cow meat//
U let niggaz fuck u in the butt, just for a nut, u better getting with prince for better luck, or get ya dick sucked//
This cat is not prepared, fucking with a bear, my lyrics a so confusing to him; it looks like A.J’s hair//(on 106and park)
This is fucking simple, how I got him mental, now I’m making this bitch voice sound instrumental//(He’s not rapping no more)
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Old 05-14-04, 06:21 PM   #7
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Aiight Shamira came quicker and faster, but androit had better flow and I liked his punches. But Shamira landed better one with multis

Vote-Shamira

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Old 05-14-04, 10:18 PM   #8
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come on and hollar at your girls. no one is postin up.
 
Old 05-14-04, 10:46 PM   #9
sHiFtY fInGeRs
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ok shimaira took this easy battle and uhm well im not sure how many other ppl will notice that adroit is using eminem's rhymes lol so this one dont even need to be explained farther, if yo gonna bite, bite someone no one has heard of lol

adroits rhyme -I'm steaming like a teapot
You slithering snake gibbering fake fibbering flake

also an eminem line coincidnece i dont think so

hey return the fav shifty vs tay on the front line please thnxs im up 2-1
 
Old 05-14-04, 10:48 PM   #10
macKa
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biting? no good adroit. besides, Shamira ripped u neway.
vote - shamira.
 
Old 05-15-04, 01:12 AM   #11
Da Vinci
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Shamira takes this anyway you look at. For starters it says 10 bars not 10 lines, which meant you had half the battle he did adroit. Besides the fact he ripped you with punches the whole way through your shakira thing wasn't much of a punch.
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Old 05-15-04, 01:33 AM   #12
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Adroit: First of all dogg, I hope you know what a "bar" is cuz that wasnt no 10 bars. What I did like was the punch about the brain and the jog of memory. That was pretty creative. But the opening and closing was average. The punch I mentioned earlier was the only hot punch that you had in your rhyme. The vocab and Flow was pretty average as well. Keep Spittin Fam.


Shamira: You had a couple good punches in your flow. You used the word "FUCKIN" to much but its aight. The flow and vocab was pretty basic but you did enough to defeat your opponent. Opening and Closing were average as well.

Vote: Shamira

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