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Lil' Doggpound 0 0%
MC BERETTA 2 100.00%
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Old 05-16-04, 07:42 PM   #1
MC BERETTA
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Arrow Lil' Doggpound vs MC BERETTA

IP: A8B9 6596

15 LINES MAX
10 LINES MIN
NO BITIN SHIT
U SPIT FIRST DAWG
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Old 05-16-04, 07:50 PM   #2
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sup man u ready to battle dawg \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\........
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Old 05-16-04, 07:53 PM   #3
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alright man....if i don't do it right it's my first battle..
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Old 05-16-04, 07:54 PM   #4
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i know this is probably a stupid question but what do u mean by no bitin shit?...sry first time
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Old 05-16-04, 07:58 PM   #5
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I’m all up in this to win like I was “all up in it”
Got so many different styles, as if I was “Schizophrenic”
I know this battle ground, so “skip tha limerick”
I’ll “stick you up” with nothin’ but a “Staple Gun”
Pound ya-in-ta fluid, like syrup, if you was a doughnut ya’d be a “Maple One”
Ya can’t do anything so ya father abandoned ya, he wanted a “Capable Son”
My rhymes aint escapable, so why Run?
Stay and face the music like it was all up “under ya noes”
Don’t fuck up this time, don’t “blunder ya flows”
Don’t make a mistake or I’ll put “you up to dry”
Hangin’ on a clothes line, Hmm..”I wonder why!?”
Cuz you all drippin’ with sweat when you up against this “Number One Guy”
I’ll take you apart even if I have to use “Racist Propaganda”
The worst of the worst, ya “faceless, I can’t stand-ya”
You've surpassed my "deserts" I’m surprised you even "existed"
I'll "defeat" this "weakling” so he'll believe I "one"(won) like "monotheistics
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Old 05-16-04, 07:59 PM   #6
MC BERETTA
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sun just dont steal dawgz lyrics or ya get fucked be wise b ..........................
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Old 05-16-04, 08:42 PM   #7
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yo lines are so whack ur ass is gettin shot
with u rhyming like that ur gonna get hurt a lot
ur such a jackass ur making me so god damn sick
i'm gonna make sure i'm gonna cut off ur dick
later on dog ur gonna get rejected by so many
once u make a demo u won't get one penny
u need to stop talking about ur own damn self
or ur ass is gonna get thrown off the shelf
i rhyme so fast u won't pick up the pace
i'll tell u right now that ur a fuckin disgrace
bitch ur ass is now gonna be really fuckin played
oh by the way fuck u very much and have a nice day
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Old 05-16-04, 10:10 PM   #8
MC BERETTA
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big up some votes plse peeps ......................................
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Old 05-17-04, 01:35 PM   #9
lyrical distruction
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mcberbitta won dis far from it cuz he had more flows, lines, better structure and performance wise beat the other guy, so im gonna have to vote for him. On better punches, wordplay, flow, and structure.
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Old 05-26-04, 08:28 AM   #10
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MC BERETTA better verse period. better punches and lyircs. step up your lyrics and punches though. h why waste a verse on a loser. not a hate vote but lil doggpound you need to step up big time. im not sure there was even a punch in your verse.return the fava

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Old 05-30-04, 03:21 PM   #11
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MC
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

Lil'
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

WiNNeR = MC BERETTA

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