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Old 05-17-04, 11:05 AM   #1
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Politikal Warvare

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Votin for nuthin....Politikal Warfare
We burnin bridges wit all of our int'l affairs
Children crying at home in their prayers
Daddy's gone to fight an unknown enemy overseas for a year and he's scared
And when push come to shove...I gotta do more than push
We cant let office be ran by a Dick and a Bush
9/11...tragedy or conspiracy?
Records show intelligence warned Bush a earlier see?
And Bush scared to be a man...fight his own fights
So in trial he replaces himself with Condoleeza Rice
What kinda shit is that?That shit is whack
Some bitch frontin like she was there during the attacks
From tha middle East to the West wing
Concentrating on our own country is tha best thing
I swear,this politikal shit, I fuckin hate it
Its so damn jaded
Puttin 2 of the worlds biggest rivals in Camp David
Just to ease all the fuckin tension
From the pressure of us citizens who know that shit aint convincin
I swear we gotta change who the President is for the next 4 years
Or we still gonna be in a storm of political warfare
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Old 05-17-04, 11:05 PM   #2
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this was very nyce true and i like truth na mean straight concept for the whole piece and this needs to be upped cuz it is real and i was feelin it inspiring my next poem 1
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Old 05-23-04, 12:40 PM   #3
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awwww Im flattered sexy....thanks....Uppin
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Old 05-25-04, 02:44 PM   #4
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Uppin this poem.....I would like feedback
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Old 06-03-04, 07:39 PM   #5
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feedback plz//
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Old 06-11-04, 10:23 AM   #6
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Uppin this piece
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