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Virginia Spittin First.....

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ok...im back.....

you wanna step to the best that beats ya face red,
the only this crackhead will gain weight is if i pump him full of lead//
40caliburhitz done got me heated,
this bitch sounds like a scratched cd......always repeatin//
the only way you could win this battle is if you were the main man on retarded american idol,
im the deadlyst deciple-to hideous to be mentioned in the bible//
you wanna battle me so come at me strong,
cause the only way you'll make me choke is if you was some bum trees packed in the bong//
i've seen this coming through my sights as a rifle man,
imma publicly imbares you like the taliban//
rip you apart and blast open your torso,
this battle for you is over so bow down and suck then blow//............. quicky

Hitz UppIn His Game!

Ya Condition~Of~Spitting, Leaves Me Wondering Why You Picture~A~Vision
Those Shits~Are~Pre~Writtin' & They Still Suck, You Get Diminished~Like~Victims
This~Kid~Is~Finished, Why Does He Insist On Further~Punishment
I Hit You So Much With *Acid* You Could Literally Murder~Nurishment
This~Kid Stands Less Of A Chance Walking Outta This Then Christopher~Reaves
You Couldn't Be *Dope*, If You *Chewed Herbs* And Started Spitting~Some~Trees
Dumb Fuck, Listen 2 Me, Before I Hit You With Fifty Different Stabbing~Weapons
I Travel In Light Speed, That's Why Ya Quick Death Happened~In~Seconds
I'm Grabbing~The~Essence With Both Hands, You Know I'ma Destroy~You
I'm *(W)rapping~These~Presents* Like It's Christmas, Virginia, I'ma Just *Toy-You*
I Choose~Illusions Abuse You, Leaving You In A State Of Mass~Confusion
Leave This *Herb~Uprooted* It Seems Like You Copy-N-Paste, It's Raps~Ya~Looting
No Way A Crew Will Have You Recruited, I'm Undisputed, Ya Just A Waste~Of~Space
I'm Taking Victories~Easily, While This Faggot Decides That He Hates~Tha~Pace
Ya Style Is Disgraced-N-Mis-Placed Like A Dice On A Chess-Board
You Shoot Yaself In Da Chest~With~A~Tech So You Can Say That You Express~More

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No Way A Crew Will Have You Recruited, I'm Undisputed, Ya Just A Waste~Of~Space
I'm Taking Victories~Easily, While This Faggot Decides That He Hates~Tha~Pace

multi's stayed in flow^^ Example here..

40's shit was more complex..better written..

you wanna step to the best that beats "ya face red",
the only this crackhead will gain weight is if i pump him "full of lead"

...rhymin jus last syllable ain't gonna win nuttin..especially cuz ya jakin ya flow up an not sayin much anyway..

jus betta all around..respects

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40 came hard wit his. Good punches and personals. Structure was pretty good as well. His meta's was workin' as well. Virginia ya structure wasen't that good. Some of ya verses was run on. Really didn't use any mettas and ya punches were iffy.

My vote goes to 40

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READY FOR WAR

CHECK THIS OUT IN OPEN MIC...NEED FEEDBACK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135097

LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!

return the favor and vote when this kid against me spitts.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125019

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READY FOR WAR

CHECK THIS OUT IN OPEN MIC...NEED FEEDBACK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135097

LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!

If Ya Wouldn't Mind Returnin the Favor Either..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125122

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Viginia_Fool: well I couldn't flow right with the verse, the structure
was really lacking, the punches were average but weren't really hitting
hard, multi not there

40caliberhitz: whoa the structure was good, the punches & personals
hit harder than Virginia & I flowed better also fe,t the verse more than
Virginia

My vote goes to: 40CaliberHitz

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good punchlines virigina i was feelin that just too basic and flow slacked

40-thats good shit i flowed that thang fuckin awesomely, ur personals and punchlines won u this battle

vote-40