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Old 05-18-04, 02:59 PM   #1
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All Games Aside//
How many Muthafuckas Down to Die//
U dealin wit some Real Shit Uno like the Head of a UNICORN//
Cops think they can slide cause of that UNIFORM(haha)//
Thats a Joke to Me//
I'll Smoke My Weed//
and Exhale on the Car Indeed//
Thug Life Livin from Pay check to Pay check//
Tryin to figure which Nigga I'ma Come and Slay Next//
Too many Bulshitters//
Not enough Go Getters//
and wig Splitters//
Too many Hoe's wit Wack Pussy but Stuck Up//
Too many young Kids who wanna Grow Up but got Bucked Up//
21 Is My Life Expectancy//
where Life's Directin Me//
is Hectic B//
I want Things I have Dreams Too//
But The Murder Scenes won't let me Sleep a Breeze Threw//
I close my Eyes....and Visaulize//
a Place wit no Crooked Cops..Racism and Media Spy's//
why ask why when why is Answer'd//
but the Questions In my Mind Balance like Topless Dancer//
It's not Poetry in Motion If it's Not Movin//
Is Struggle at a STILL..... THUG LIFE PROVIN!....
THUG LIFE BITCH!(HAHA) all u fake ass niggas what kinda nigga is a Thug life nigga just look and u will know if u are a THUG LIFE nigga cause REAL recognize REAL...haha
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Old 05-19-04, 07:49 AM   #2
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eh it was alright, could of had a better flow to it
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Old 05-19-04, 09:38 AM   #3
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not bad but a pretty choppy flow could use a lil more multis and shyt but overall not to bad.............
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