Kind Of A Simple Battle. Em's Punches Hit Harder Tho, And I felt His Shit Was More Creative. I Liked How Em Opened Up To, Hittin Hard On That First Line.


VOTE: NASTY EM

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nasty won this battle handdown

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Fuck all that put me down FUCK U ALL

This Guy Wanted To Battle Set It Up And Got Offline...
You Define Whackness.. I Think You Should Resign...
egh, weak opener, it flows fine and all but no punches wordplay metas similies
Why Didnt You Decline.. Now Your Just A No Show..
Ima PRO.. Your Style Licks.. Your Never Gun To Grow..
Same problem here as before.. Your structure so far is good but nothing that wins a battle
My Flow Is Smashin Bricks, And Its Playin Mean Tricks...
Once This Battle Is Over My Wins Gun Change To 26...
You know what Im going to say here....
Only 8 Lines Is What It Took To Kill Ya, Its Taragic...
Gun Fill Ya Up Wit Holes Like I Just Did To Black Magik...
Weak Closer here... This just didn't have any punchlines, any personal disses, anything to make me consider giving you the victory in this besides the fact that it flowed and had a nice structure.

wanna be hot to deaf? ill put da ~flame in your ear~//
u beatin Em? u drunk too many canz of ~canadien Beer~// ( drunk)
Decent Opener, The punchline wasn't amazing but there was some good wordplay and it had some creativity
spitz so hot, son , IM known for ~boiling foes~//
cuz ur "shit" wouldnt "flow" even in ~toilet bowlz~//
Good wordplay on the second line, but its kind of a used concept
u scared to post a bar, cuz even ur momz ~know u would hide~//
have ur name under "depth"(death)and i aint talkin bout a ~scuba dive~//
This was a good bar, The depth wordplay and punchline was very creative I think this might have been the dopest line i've read in a little while... Good job here
u aint a killa, just a whore dat love ~flossin wit wigz~//
shut da fuck up and add a 1 for a ~loss on ur sig~//
Yeah this closer wasn't super strong, but this verse as a whole had a good use of wordplay, punchlines, etc... I enjoyed reading it- which is most important... The only suggestions I can make is to work on your structure a little to try and get your syllable count closer on each line... And keep trying to get those killer wordplay and punchline references in their and you will continue to earn many a vote... My vote- Nasty Em

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this battle was close, but nasty em got it with wordplay n punches. gkillaz was alright but nasty took this one. i was really feelin the hot to deaf line and this one:

u aint a killa, just a whore dat love ~flossin wit wigz~//
shut da fuck up and add a 1 for a ~loss on ur sig~//

nice battle

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Nasty Got This, His Punches Were Harder Example:
Nasty - wanna be hot to deaf? ill put da ~flame in your ear~//
u beatin Em? u drunk too many canz of ~canadien Beer~//

GKilla - -Didn't have any punches
This is About allyou had for that
You Define Whackness.. I Think You Should Resign...
Why Didnt You Decline.. Now Your Just A No Show..
Ima PRO.. Your Style Licks.. Your Never Gun To Grow..

Overall Nasty Has The Better Verse

vote = nasty

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

Flow: Nasty em, gkilla, ya flow was basic, not bad but basic, step it up a bit next time
Punches: Nasty em, gkilla once again basic. stuff like you should resign aint interesting to read. Be creative, like thr flame to ya ear line
Personals: G killa....It was a weak eprsonal (this guy wanted to battle set it up, went offline) but I think nastys only one was..you aint a killa...so as weak as it was ya took it
Multies: both of ya were lacking this, try and spit multies, it helps up your flow aswell
Vocab:Nasty em...I keep saying this..Gkilla...basic basic basic lol...Try using more complex vocab...nasty wasn't overally complex...but it was more complex then kilals verse
Originality: Nasty...the hot to def line, toilet bowl..shit everything..no originality shown in a basic verse nawmean so soz killa

Over all Nasty got this. Killa....step it up, I dnt no if thats ya best, but I'd work on more creative punches and complex vocab

Vote: Nasty

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Multis- Nasty (had em on every line... Don't think G had any)
Flow- Nasty (multis did it)
Punches- Nasty (no comparison)
Personals- G (not many in either verse but I think G had 1 or 2)
Complexity- Nasty (no contest... G's shit was too simple)
Structure- WHO GIVES A FUCKK ABOUT STRUCTURE????
Opener- Nasty (but who gives a fuckk)
Closer-Nasty (but still, who gives a fuckk)

VOTE=Nasty EM

Nasty needs better comp

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