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Old 05-19-04, 05:02 PM   #1
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time to toast b/c it's my first post of ever...
im not hardcore, never even raped before, but i will get better...
this is my first one, but i will b better when im done...
soon to b the best, better than the rest, w/ a flow sweater than a honeybun.




hahaha time to get seriouse lol


off the top when i spit i'll make yah tremble...
because my flow is harder than a cold nipple...
you can't handle half the lyriks i fuck'n bring...
i'll leave you fucked up like steven hawking....
beat you till your numb like a parapledgic...
step to this and i'll make ya look pathetic.....




didn't give yah much........but i didn't have much time ...so try to rate it....leave me a post if i have to peep other people's shit
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Old 05-19-04, 05:03 PM   #2
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it was ok fo a newb man just try betta
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Old 05-19-04, 07:12 PM   #3
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none of them lines rhymed...
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Old 05-20-04, 09:34 AM   #4
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ima be strait up with you that was horrible u need to visit the tutorial forum and see if u can learn something while readin all that it will show u some rhymes and multis and shyt so go check it out be4 u spit agian............
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Old 05-20-04, 09:45 AM   #5
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ya lines didnt flow homie
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