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05-19-04, 08:15 PM
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The Truth
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Elite Flows
IP: B682 856F
Seein Us at the Mic Sends Chills Down ur Spine
Whos next in Line?Were Represented By our Flow whats ur Sign Spoken Murder were wanted across Arenas Everywere U can only Sit and Stare we kill kids for Fun We Dont Care Kids get Goosebumps and Chills Just from our Presence We Float on the Mic with Prestige and Deadly Essence Divine In Battle Reachin all Emcee's in Good Time We Make Millions on "Roc the Mic" u barealy make a dime So if you ever see A Elite Lyricist Run while you Can Cause after they Rip u on the Mic u wont be able to Stand real quik
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05-19-04, 08:26 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: D394 EAD6
Contend......was good. Vocab could be betta u held on basics. Ummm dont Center it it makes it harder to read.....I did that also but i dont do that anymore. Flow could use transitions to make it smoother and fluent................
yup. Overall nice job
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05-19-04, 09:00 PM
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I thought it was a 6.32/10 i can do better but w/e lol thnx for feed
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05-19-04, 11:34 PM
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IP: A4D4 2931
not bad for a keystyle
could of been a bit more complex though
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